[Denied]Human Application Darklord2002

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Account Name: DarkLord2002

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone:Central Time zone

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:yes

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing:to act as a character you are trying to create 

Meta-gaming: To use outside information to benefit ones one character. example i read online that a group was planning to attack me so i ran as far as i could.

Power-emoting: To do an action that could have had a different result without even trying. Example: Damon grew into rage and killed everyone in the building in a fit of rage.

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name: Damon Tyranus

Current Age: 31

Race: Human

Sub-race (if any): halfling 

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

Damon lived on a small Mountain just off from Arethor, Damon's Parents's always said  "never go to the city that it was to dangerous for a little kid" so Damon stayed put. one day while Damon was out in the forest two very large men came to the house and slayed Damon's Parents. Damon did not know at the time, Damon returned to the house to find his parents dead on the floor blood every where. Damon fell to the ground in tears screaming "WHY!" Damon eventually cried him self out and fell asleep near there bodies. Damon woke up in a cottage in a mountain near sulvus next to a man called Galyn Mortain he told Damon that he had found him lying in that house with his dad parents and that he had taken him here. Damon asked "why where you out so far?" Galyn replied  with "it isn't impotent, it is impotent that you are alive. as the years went on Galyn tought Damon Various skills, the arts of the sword Crafting of items and Galyn's Favorite designing cloths and dresses. As the years went on Damon became more and more skilled with the sword so on one faithful day Damon told Galyn thanks for taking care of him as a kid but i think its time i go. Damon was determent to join the shields so off he went.

Ambitions for the Future:to join the shields and protect oren  from all evil.

Personality:Dark, cold, but has a heart

Skills:Damon has very sharp skills with the sword and the craft of armor and cloths 

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):http://www.planetmin...ilhelm-1914425/

Any other details you wish to share about your character:

 

1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do? Answer:Damon looks at the man for a brief second and thinks to him self "what should i do" pondering it over in his head he decides just to tell the guards about the strange man and continues with his life

 

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a

large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armor and an iron longsword, how do you react? Answer: Damon sees the old man suffering and cant just watch him be killed by these bandits Damon looks around to see if he can find anythin. Damon finds a rock and throws it at them and says 'OI OVER HERE' the bandits turn and start to chase Damon but due to the fact they are in heavy armor and Damon in leather gives him the advantage. Damon lures them into a think forest and he uses his speed to duck and weave in between trees to attack the bandits to the point when the bandits surrender. Damon decides to let them live and lets them go. Damon then returns to see if the old man had been injured. he was fine the old man offers Damon some food and a place to rest and Damon takes him up on his offer.

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens). Answer:  “Fifty gold, take it or leave it!” Said Damon in smug attitude. The shop keeper was fairly stingy about his wepon supplies, and was not willing to let them go cheaply. "No. At least 80." Damon stared. He despised being here as it was, being in the Oren capital. He wanted to be anywhere else and was only here to restock and help a acquaintance in need. “FINE, just take my money. The quicker I get done with the dumb haggling, the sooner I can get back to what I want to do!” Damon finally paid the number the shop keeper had asked for and turned to leave, when the shop keeper called out to him. “Wait, don’t you want more?” Said the attendant, to which Damon gave a quick, “Not if you keep chargin

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- Unfortunately, I am going to have to deny this -

 

Firstly, please answer all questions. Do not attempt to delete previous applications and posting to the minecraft forum.

 

Secondly, your biography was extremely cliche and short. Please use more LoTC and attempt to come up with a more detailed backstory. The whole "Bandits killed my parents and a mysterious person that happens to be trained with a sword takes me in and trains me" is extremely overused to a point where I can't feel like I can accept it. I really want to know your character and what he stands for, his skills, his attitude etc, please give me a real look at him.

 

Lastly, your ORQ's are short and lacked detailed dialogue and actions. It is important in an ORQ to describe the setting, preform character actions, and include dialogue all in one paragraph. Also, please try to space out the questions accordingly. Refer to an implemented application for a proper example.

 

Please wait 24 hours after this post to reapply. Feel free to PM me with any questions or concerns!

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