V0idsoldier

There is little physical change and yet they are stronger and, somehow, have increased hearing? How does one get stronger by growing more teeth lol

How is that a excuse to create more cliche'd material... That is just a childish argument that wont go anywhere. Rather than make excuses to cover unoriginality, strive for something unique.

1: So they eventually are able to fully control it and simply will themselves to become this creature? 2: Interesting, makes sense. 3: No amount of pain tolerance can simply take away that pain lol. Skin tearing and stretching, bones shifting in and out of place. You would have to have no pain receptors to not feel that lol

It looks alright. A few points and questions Id like to make though. First off, how can they control these transformations? How does that development work with what you said? You said they transform when Hungry or in Danger, so how can they also transform on their own? Do they make themselves feel hungry? I believe being able to transform on will is silly, as it is not explained. I did not read anything on what Magic was used. Unless I missed it could you point it out? There is mentions of a ritual which is very cult like, but I did not see anything magic wise. In your post you make it seem like the more this happens the better in control they get and the less pain they feel. Can you elaborate on how this works? That's all I have for now, just curious on some of these points.

Yes of course, I apologize for that. http://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/86266-lore-completed-those-that-feed-in-red-imp-parasite/

I don't think it's impossible to escape stereotypes at all. I believe I managed to do it with my lore which is the only reason it /almost/ got accepted. I hope now that it is in a retrial it will be accepted this time around. I don't believe stereotypical vampires/werewolves serve a place in this server, but I do believe that altered versions, unique versions, do.