Unfortunately, your application has been denied. I really enjoyed your bio, but a few other things were lacking.
- Your definitions are still incorrect. If you want help, make sure to PM me, as certain definitions have double meanings! Compare yours to other accepted applications, if need be (Just make sure not to plagiarize!)
- Your skin is still a little far fetched.. If you'd like, make a post in our graphics forum; there are plenty of people willing to help make skins. If all else fails, I could find some time to make a skin for you.
Good job adding more lore into your bio; it looks good. You may reapply in 24 hours. Good luck!