[Denied]Lando's High-Ef Application.......

[lando293 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:lando293

How old are you?:17

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:no trolling

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):combat system, and the dying 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: my dear and extremly plebish friend longfellow

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?:it is where u create a being and become fully emerced in their lives and world around them

What is metagaming?:using OOC to our advantage

What is powergaming?:You have traits that could be considered OP

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name:Adoice Versace

Character’s gender:male

Character’s race:High Elf

Character’s age:247

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):Adoice Versace was born into a commoner family in a nowhere village his mother Aspen Long-Grass and his father Ederous LongStrider. his mother was addiccted to opium and his father was a drunk. once Adoice became of age his father kicked him out and told him dont come back till you have become a "someone" . and so he set out to do so
   He is now on his way to try to become a renowed tailor , he has forgotten his parents and is trying to change his stars.

Personality Traits:stuck up, jerk, gets all the ladies

Ambitions:to tailor to a high estemed person

Strengths/Talents:great clothes designer, getting all the ladies

Weaknesses/Inabilities: huberous, coward, snubb, 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):white hair,high fashion clothes, pointy ears

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):It would not allow me to post my skin so heres the link  

http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/male-elf-warrior/

[Overland 349]

  Unfortunately your application has been denied. You may reapply in 24 hours with the following changes made.

• Please expand on all three of your definitions, examples are encouraged but are not required.
• I would like you to expand your character's biography and add server lore such as town names and realms. Plenty of lore can be found on the wiki (http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/.)
• I would also like you to expand upon your personality traits and perhaps describe your strengths and weaknesses. 

Feel free to contact me via private message with any questions or concerns regarding your application, and best wishes with being accepted. I shall also send you a private message addressing your confusion with the combat rules.

[Overland 349]

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