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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: TheOK1

How old are you?: 17

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am aware.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): No, this is my first time.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:we do not tolerate the following on any Lord of the Craft service:

  • Discrimination and prejudice (unless IC)

Why? Yay kitty racism!

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): This isn't about the rules but about character death, is it permanent, or do you have to create a scenario for that?

Is ERPing ok at all on the server, or is it exempt completely? The Global rules and the RPing rules clash against each other. 

Also is 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I was look for an RP server without whitelists and I found this magical server.... (no sarcasm intended)  

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: A way to game by creating a character and acting out how he or she would react to situations r life in general. 

What is metagaming?: The act of using outside or previously gained knowledge within a gaming universe for personal gain or advantage.

What is powergaming?: taking shortcuts in a game that is counter-intuitive towards the game itself.

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Phobos Hellspune

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Human, Heartlander

Character’s age: 18

Biogrphy: The only child of a well-off trader family, Phobos lived a quaint and boorish life. As a child he was unable to go outside due to a weak heart and sensitive skin; he stayed inside his home most of his life. This condition, afraid that their child may die any day, ensured that his parents coddled him exceedingly and spoiled him. As well as being extremely coddled, he has no idea of the major events that happened outside of his life in the small manor, shielded by his parents from the horrors of the world. Though, having his weak body (and knowing nothing of that world) Phobos has always dreamed of going outside of his manor and seeing the world himself, playing as a pirate , swordsmen, magician in his free time when he was alone or with boys his age. Most of his free time however was taken up by his practice in magic..     

 

As Phobos grew older, fifteen at the most, his health became stronger, in which he relished finally being able to practice sword play with his father and friends. Finally, with this new health came the mobility such as leaving the house,where he took advantage of by buying groceries with the house 2 or 3 servants when he could. At times, he would also sneak out of town and speak to the dryads closest to his village where he'd find peace speaking to several different dryad as he could, causing his parents much stress. As Phobos finally came of age he begge-- asked his parents if he could leave the "nest" and see the world in his own eyes. His parents tried to tell the boy the evils he may see in his journey, however, this delighted him even more. Through tears and some bitter sweet laughs on his childlike innocence, they gave him their blessing to leave Hellspune manor and go out himself to see the world and have his very own adventure.

 

Personality Traits: Phobos is naturally optimistic and adventurous, but cautious young man. Though he is spoiled he isn't selfish, willing to do chores for almost anyone. The young man is quiet, shy, and especially timid among other humans. though among dryads he is quite  friendly and knows how most dryads tick. At times he can also be known to have a one track mind, corresponding with his innate family stubbornness. 

 

Ambitions: Besides going out to create his own adventure and see the world and its very inhabitants, Phobos looks to master magic and learn alchemy. He then hope to, one day, fully combine the two to make a new world power, which he plans to call 'Arcane ' magic. If not he just plans to have many adventures and have fun doing it, planing to learn how to better himself in the art of cooking.a

Strengths/Talents: Phobos has always seemed to have good talent in magic in alchemy and in staying in the manor most of his life,  where books were his best friends. Thus reading many book, Phobos also has a mind full of most laws the world. 

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Due to most of his life in the manor, Phobos isn't physically as strong as most Heartlanders. He also has a weaker heart than most men forcing him to have a lot less stamina than most mortals generally. 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Phobos is a young man of above average stature, saying thus he is 5"8' and has a build of something between lithe and slightly sickly. He has white, silver-ish .albino hair and blue eyes from a minor magic accident he had. His skin is milkish-white, filling in with his albino look with sharpish features in his chin and freckles across his nose

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  Unfortunately your application has been denied, please reapply after 24 hours with the requested changes made.

  • Your role-playing and power-gaming definitions are incorrect.
  • Your meta-gaming definition has been plagiarised from the Urban Dictionary. Plagiarism is extremely frowned upon and doing so again will result in a one month ban from applying.
  • While your biography is of a decent length, it lacks server lore. The wiki http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/ contains all the information you need, such as town names. 
  • Your character cannot know magic prior to playing on the server. Nor can he have any sort of aptitude for it.
  • You didn't upload a skin screenshot, this guide shows you how.

 

Feel free to private message with any questions or concerns you have regarding your application or the server. And remember to not plagiarise again.

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