[Denied] [Pending] Dean's Application.

[epixx231 4]

Out-Of-Character Information

What’s your Minecraft account  Name?: dean102, not very creative, I know.
How old are you?: 15
Are you aware the server is PG-13: Yes.
Have you applied  to this server before?: No.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Cyberbullying is not allowed, and is punishable. I hate Cyberbullying, and I completely agree with the punishment.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?: It would have to be the magic applications. I'm not all that sure how it works...
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was looking through some Minecraft RP servers in google, and I saw this. I looked through it, and from what I saw, it looks pretty solid!

Definitions

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is the act of playing as a fictional character. It means to play and act as the character you are portraying, and creating a story as you play through the life of the character.
What is metagaming?: Metagaming is the act of a character knowing something that they would usually not be able to know in character. For instance, suddenly knowing the location of a Dragon, or what an enemy faction is planning.
What is powergaming?: ​Powergaming is when players perform actions that other players do not have freedom to avoid. All actions on other players must be attempts. For instance, a player has gotten into a bar fight, and then does the action of; "Roundhouse kicks the opponent in the head, instantly killing him." Instead, it should be something along the lines of "He attempts to roundhouse kick the opponent, though the kick is not very strong."

In-Character Information

Character’s name: Dean Mikas. (Last name forgotten)
Character’s gender: Male.
Character’s race: Human.
Character’s age: 18
Biography: Born a Heartlander in Siegrad, Dean spent his childhood living with his grandfather, Aldus, a Mage. Aldus was given entitlement to Dean's wellbeing after his parents died in a house fire. Dean usually assissted his Uncle in his magic experiments, usually his uncle's experiments either never worked, or blew up. Dean however, never minded this, for he loved his Uncle. Though it was clear that his uncle was beginning to become more obsessed with having a successful experiment, and was starting to go insane. On Dean's 18th birthday, Aldus attempted something completely idiotic. An attempt to create a portal to the Nether. Venturing far into the woods with Dean, he created the portal, and attempted to send Dean through it as a test. It was then that Dean had discovered that the portal was built, like Aldus' other experiments, unstable. As soon as Dean touched the portal, it blew up. Aldus was killed, and Dean was warped to the cloud temple. Dean was scarred from the explosion, tinting his left arm purple, and causing him to lose his memory, for better, or worse... He then stumbled into the nearest town, longing to remember who he is.

Personality Traits: ​Dean is extremely hyperactive, and loves to crack jokes. He's rather eager to get into action, and help people. Though he becomes reluctant if the task given is dangerous. He is also afraid of the dark, and Daemon. For a reason he can not remember, he is interested in magic.
Ambitions: He longs to remember who he is, and somehow longs to become a great Mage.
Strengths/Talents: Dean has high endurance, both physically and mentally. He is rather skilled at making small makeshift tools, though can't remember why.
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Dean is extremely scrawny, as a result , he lacks physical strength. He is also very clumsy when it comes to things such as forging.
Appearance: Dean has pale skin, light blond hair, and an oval shaped head. His eyes are tinted purple due to his Uncle's experiments, as with his left hand. He usually wears a white shirt, leather pants and shoes , and a loose green scarf. He wears a gauntlet on his right hand almost all the time. He is 5'8 feet tall, and weighs 91 lbs. He also has a very scrawny build.
Appearance, in a screenshot: Noob at embedding, so here's a link.
http://imgur.com/gallery/WLqwkig 

Edited June 25, 2015 by epixx231

[Mephistophelian 977]

This Application is put on:

 

 

For the following reasons:

 

-Your biography contains lore-breaking information. For example; A character cannot have mana-altering capabilities like yours does, especially not inherent/unavoidable ones.

 

-Thusly, change the rest of your application to fit the change in your biography.

 

You have 24 hours to make the change.

If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to PM me!

 

This Application is:

 

 

For the following reasons:

 

-Some changes made, but the biography still contains lore breaking information (e.g. a portal being made that inexplicably teleports a person to the cloud temple). I advise you rewrite this with a less magical orientation, as magic on this server does take a while to wrap one's head around.

 

You have 24 hours to wait until you can reapply.

 

If you have any questions or comments, please feel free to PM me!

Edited June 25, 2015 by hugothechamp
Denied

[Mephistophelian 977]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.