[Denied] my rp details

[DragoTheLegend 2]

Character’s name: [bounty hunter]  Drago  Legend

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: human

Character’s age: 19

Biography I am an orphan my parents died by murder, the murderer was never caught. i am a skilful swordsman and bounty hunter i search for the murderer and travel from town to town, i am easily hired by 12 silver coins but if you hire for murder i will refuse.

my blade is called arc nemesis it is very strong. i have the ability to control the wind and can take away the air from people.

Personality Traits: cool, calm

Ambitions: to kill the murderer and earn money

Strengths/Talents: agile, skilled swordsman, ability to control wind.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: far sighted

Appearance: brown hair,4 foot 9, 70kg, peach skin, brown eyes.

(btw i couldn't get a skin pic cos my pc wouldn't let me)

Edited September 19, 2015 by DragoTheLegend
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[tilly 5115]

Hello, applicant, you've been denied for the following reasons:

• You have failed to fill out the entirety of the application!

• You must use the application format that we provide for you - click here to view it.

• Make sure that you contain more references to the lore, such as the place your character grew up in, or where he/she has traveled to or aspires to go to. Also, try including more historical things that your character could have witnessed (like the giant worm attack in Athera!) - check out the wiki if you need to.

• You have failed to attach a skin! If you need help with getting a screenshot, follow this guide.

• When writing your character's biography, please refrain from using the cliche of 'my parents were killed and now I am orphaned'.

• Please improve the quality of your application because I do not feel you understand what is required in order to role-play on this server!

You may reapply in twenty four hours.

If you need any help, feel free to PM me or ask for help in the WS chat in-game.

Good luck!

[tilly 5115]

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