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johns meeting 1st in the war call series

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i don't know about this said john*. its ok said bill. thats what you said about the war. thats the war said bill. ok... ahhh! john bumped in to a man. hey said the man. bill look at the man and said oh my! john looked up at the man and said. oh no! the man said oh what? its--its you! john said. yah, its me. my lord said bill. yah, now who are you he said to john. I'm john Willson, i fought it the last war and... you lived?! yelled lord Henry.  yes it did said john. well are you coming to the next war? said henry. yes.. yes i am! (epic music!)      *john is a surviver of a large war.

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I believe you could use some pointers in writing. 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IR9Av-TzSV4




 

I believe you could use some humour.

It kinda gets old after what feels like 30 of these redundant topics.

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Moved to the Archive. It shall be sorted into the appropriate category shortly.

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