[Denied] [Pending]mcginty85's Application (WIP)

[mcginty 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: mcginty85

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: structures which defy physics, its my favorite because, as a great lover of architecture and building I find properly supported builds very immersive. 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? a friend

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: roleplay is when you take on the role of a character, acting out how they would act and what they would do.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when a player uses OOCly info ICly. This could be like, for example; 'Hey im goin kill the king' so the player who finds this out would go to the king and tell him ICly.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is when a player  acts or plays a character more powerfully than they should be, like a farmer with no military experience, somehow picks up a sword for the first time and is a master sword man. Or when a character refuses to die if this happens ICly.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Odin Greyhammer

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: Dwarf

Character’s age: 50

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
(( I GTG atm will have biography added soon))

 

Personality Traits:

 Reliable::  Odin is a very reliable and trusting man,who will take secrets to the grave.
Strong-minded: Odin is very strong-minded never doubt his say or suggestions
Family oriented: Odin is very fond of what remaining family he has and would protect them to the death.
Flaws:
Over Protective: Odin is an over protective man never wanting to put anyone he cares for at risk.
Stubborn: Odin is quite a stubborn man believing he is always right and rarely changes his mind on people and ideas.
Quick tempered: Odins quick temper and aggression leaves him a hard person to get along with when annoyed.

 

 

Ambitions:

To become one of the best blacksmiths in the known world, and bring honor to his family.

 

Strengths/Talents:

Is strong

good blacksmithing skills

is good with numbers

and has a good mind for diplomacy

 

Weaknesses/Inabilities:

quick tempered

would place his honour above his life, and in some cases could be his downfall.

 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Odin is an average sized durgar,with a long thick beard,with grey hairs starting to form. He is a broad shouldered man with huge thick eyebrows and stern eyes,Odin’s beard is platted in parts.He has a strong physical appearance and he wears an old tattered apron,that covers his basic attire of a white tunic and cotton trousers.Standing only 4.5ft with a relativity large center of gravity.

 

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://prntscr.com/6rn29w

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

I'm going to put this on pending since it's obvious you will add more to your app, but don't mind me giving you additional list of things you need work on:

• You, of course, lack a biography. Be sure to add more about the events that happened on your travels on such! For more info, Feel free to message me!
• Add more to your personality traits! This helps build out your character.

You have 24 hours to make these changes. Message me once you're done. If you need any help, feel free to contact me or any other AT!

[Crowbill 493]

Unfortunately, you have been denied for following reasons:

• Applicant failed to make set changes in given time.

Worry not, you may re-apply in 12 hours. If you need any help feel free to contact me or any other AT for help!

[Crowbill 493]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.