[Denied] My Application(Raven Crow)

[RamonGaming 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: RamonGamingYT

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: no trolling

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? i searched RP severs on YouTube

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: participating in a roleplaying Game, acting as a character

What is metagaming?: using outside knowledge from the real world in game to have unfair advantage. 

What is powergaming?: doing something in game that is always successful without giving the other player a chance to respond which is not fair.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Raven Crow

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Dark Elf

Character’s age: 35

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

  Raven Crow was a Dark Elf that traveled most of the realms trading merchandise and buying followers to help him in battles. He was a every influential elf. After a while he began to lose capitalistic power over the people. therefore he decides to adventure to a camp of orcs take the orc leaders head and Restore his power over capitalism . he fought and fought tons of orcs and slaughtered every orc in the camp. as he goes for the leaders head he gets stabbed by a gem like sword that shines of the color purple. he rages and starts turning into the The Corrupted. he start enlarging and grows feathers  on his head and forearms. his mouth starts growing into a deform beak that has teeth encrusted into it. his hands grows bird like claws and his eyes turn from purple to a solid yellow.

  He looks at his warriors a kills them one by one, then he kills of all the orcs but couldnt find the one who stabbed him. after what just happened he managed to control himself and became more civilized again. he as he is now has been accepted by society and therefore respected as the Dark Elf he used to look like. he returned to be a merchant again and now he still fights but he fights a lot less sine he just wants to be a professional merchant. he will kill if attacked or provoked. But now he is nicer and wants to help the poor and make everything a socialistic place. though he does murmur under his breath "The Corruption" "Corrupted" "I Am The Corrupter" he is a very social being and wishes to even out the economy.

 

Personality Traits: Twitchy, Kind, Welcoming, Dark Humor, Influential 

Ambitions: to help others in money problems and make everyone and everything wealthy

Strengths/Talents: He is good at influencing people to bye or sell products, a very soothing deep coarse morbid voice that anyone would like to listen to. Sharp crow like claws

Weaknesses/Inabilities: has trouble walking straight. and he hesitates in battle

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): he is 6'2 and weighs 145 pounds

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

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Under Review

[Greener 687]

You have been denied for many reasons! Fix these issues below.

• You did not follow the rules of replying after 24 hours of your recent denial . This is a warning if you do this again you will face a 1 week ban
• You also plagiarized both powergaming and metagaming definitions. Do this again and face a one week ban.
• Your biography is a mess just fix it up in general by rewriting it.. I would avoid being a leader of people when writing your bio and leave this until you are accepted to try and rise to power. 
• You also powergame during your biography by killing literally everyone...
• You also need to add server lore to your bio such as towns and events. Keep in mind we are currently within Vailor. I suggest reading this for help http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Dark+Elves
• You skin barely matches a dark elf I would suggest looking here http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Dark+Elves

You may reapply in 24 hours after the time of this denial. Remember do not plagiarize again or face a ban and make another application after 24 hours. 

 

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Moved to Denied Application Forum.