[Denied] [Pending] My Application 4 this lovely server

[Mcicehopper488 0]

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What's your Minecraft Name?: Mcicehopper488

How old are you?: 12 years

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am. You wouldn't think I read the rules did I?

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Faking of being a GM.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? Server listing.

 

What is roleplaying?: (Self-Definition) The art of acting as someone you are not, usually done with a group of peop

What is metagaming?: (Google) Something like D&D, where you are able to gain knowledge that your character shouldn't.

Ex: You know what all of the Lore is, but your character doesn't, and you can't tell them.

What is powergaming?: (Google) A way where a player can say the succeed a power, without choice of the opposing player.

Ex: P1 hits P2 in the face, makng P2 die.

Character’s name: Kreaton

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Wood Elf

Character’s age: 98

Bio: I grew up in a non-elven town, with 2 brothers, and I got into some pretty n so people call me a "Chaotic Neutral". I also became an orphan, with my brothers of course, due to my father becoming insane of seeing the Iron Tree. My mom got presumably lost in the Forrest of Adrallan. Now, I am set on finishing, some of my father unfinished work, of documenting all the weird occurences here.

 

After I left my brothers, I then decided to reside in The Silver Marsh. Being an elf, I naturally knew the ways of stealth, and learned good with the skill of persuasion watching my father shop. And, with the help of my brothers, I have perfected these skills, with the inclusion of killing people. Now, I grow up in a house, alone, with only the knowledge of my brothers and dead parents to keep me going.

 

Personality: Stubborn, Smart, Persistant, Quick-Witted, Mysterious

Ambitions: Finish Father's work. Explore everything this world has to offer.

Talents: Stealth, Bartering, Sleight of Hand

Weaknesses: Will do anything, for even the smallest of info of something.

Skin: l

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[Greener 687]

Under Review

[Greener 687]

Your application has been put on pending for a few reasons. Do not fear though once the changes are made and they're right you will be accepted.

 

• Your metagaming definition is correct but please add in an example that would suit this server. Please read here for help http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying
• Your powergaming definition is wrong please check link above. 
• Your biography is too short make it at least two paragraphs long. Good use of server lore I remember that tree well...
• Avoid becoming an assassin sheathe cliché character please so just keep this is mind when updating your biography.
• Talents? I need talents. What is your character good at?
• I don't see your skin but if it looks like an assassin then I suggest changing it. Please add a screenshot of your skin. 

You have 24 hours to complete these changes or face denial. Message me once the changes are complete and if they still need adjusting I will guide you further. 

 

Needed to repost since forums couldn't allow me to edit my response...

[Greener 687]

Failed to change some of the reasons above.

• Avoid becoming an assassin sheathe cliché character please so just keep this is mind when updating your biography.
• I don't see your skin but if it looks like an assassin then I suggest changing it.

You can reapply 24 hours after this denial

[Greener 687]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.