[Denied] Whitelist Application #2 ~ SynnaContorous

[SynnaContorous 0]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!
 
What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: SynnaContorous
How old are you?: 13, 14 in January.
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with the no harassment policy the most. I've had to deal with it in the past, it's not fun. At all.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): I understand all of them.
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found out about when I was searching for Medevial/renaissance skins. (Primarily female @Gleeshers)
 
Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!
 
What is roleplaying?:  Acting out a particular role. (Theatre-like)
What is metagaming?: Metagaming is any action or method used within a game that sets some kind of way of doing. (ruleset-oriented?)
What is powergaming?: Gaming leading up to one, specific end-goal. 
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: Synnet du Sud
Character’s sex: Female 
Character’s race: Human. Southeron. (French-esque?)
Character’s age: 20.
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):
   "A time ago in the Kingdom of  Renatus, lived I, Synnet du Sud of the Southerons. There.. I was only a young girl, the age of 16, living amongst those around me during the invasion of the undead in 1539. We were shaken, forced to evacuate. The taint was decreed to be able to spread. My family was of the closer-to-the noble branch, but we were in no means of nobility... or of peasants. We lived well until the invasion. We were forced to leave our home."
    "When I was 19, the year prior to this talk, I'd finally gotten married to a relatively-unknown noble-man. We were set off well, but it never ends well, at least not for me. He just went and left at the sight of taxation. This is when I fell into the craft of alchemy. It gave me some mourning. I decided I'd stand-up to my bad luck and start a-new. That's where I am now, starting a-new." 
Personality Traits: Willful, creative, manipulating, carefree. 
Ambitions: To live in a well-off household, become the top alchemist(production wise), and to stay alive.
Strengths/Talents: Alchemy and being able to hide from attack(ers).
Weaknesses/Inabilities: Personal Goals over the common good. 
Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): Height: 5'8, Weight: 132 lbs. Blonde, dresses very noble-like. Pale.
Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):
*SIDENOTE: this skin will be edited, but it is just a base from @Gleeshers via her request.

 

Edited December 27, 2015 by SynnaContorous
Did not appropriately name the topic in my opinion.

[Lego XBOX 915]

 

You have been denied for reason(s) pointed out below, message me if you have any questions or concerns. You may re-apply after 24 hours have passed.

 

Your definition of Metagaming is incorrect, please refer to http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying for guidance.

 

Your definition of Powergaming is incorrect, please refer to http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying for guidance.

 

Southerons are black/arabic-like humans. You're more likely to be french-esque by being a farfolk or Heartlander.

 

Your lore is dated back to a time when your character would not be alive. Please use more current lore that ties into your character directly. As far as I know, there were no Undead attacks recently (19 in-game years ago).

 

Please include more Server Lore into your application. Your racial Sub-Wiki for humans can be found on the Wiki ( http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Humans )! It will help you get started in incorporating Server Lore into your Biography such as certain places, wars or even significant events. Yes, you have the kingdom of Renatus and a County - however I would like you to include the name of the world your character was born into, and the current world they live in (may be the same if they're not too old).

 

If you have any questions or concerns feel free to send me a PM! I will be more than willing to help point you in the correct direction and I highly recommend taking into consideration the advice and issue(s) with your application that I have stated above. And, changing one or two words, or deleting parts of the definition - isn't putting it in your own words. You almost plagiarized a second time and it didn't help your application.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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