[Denied] Application MCboy360

[MCboy360 1]

How old am i: 15

Are you aware that this server is PG-13: Yes

What rule i agree with the most: that Cyber bullying is prohibited

Are there any rules that confuse me: No i understand all rules

How did i find out about Lord of the Craft: YouTube

Definitions

 

What is Role Playing?

Role Playing is portraying a particular character in a certain context despite of reality where someone can differentiate from their real life characteristics 

What is Power Gaming?

Power Gaming is the act of controlling other characters and one's environment for the purpose of their entertainment or benefit

 

What is Meta-Gaming?

Meta Gaming is the act of exceeding the boundaries of Role play in order to benefit players game play such as using information obtained from outside the game and not from role playing 

 

Character Information

 

Character Name: Divetsu

Character Gender:male

Character Race: Dwarf

Character Age 51

 

My Story: i was born in Kal’Akash never knew my parents raised by a human that left me at the age of 10 and told me i could survive on my own now im studying the arcane magic 

and find my parents  but first  i will have to connect to the void

 

Strengths: pays very good attention to the situation, always helps people when needed

Weaknesses: rushes into things to fast, cocky 

Ambitions: connecting to the void

Length: 1.30cm

Weight: 80kg 

My Dwarf skin :

 

 

 

 

 

Edited January 2, 2016 by MCboy360
forgot to add skin

[Crowbill 493]

Under review.

[Crowbill 493]

Unfortunately, you have been denied for following reasons:

• You MC account is missing from your application.
• You defnitions have been plagiarized from other applications. This is your last warning.
• Your characters age does not match the place of your birth. You were born 51 years ago, but races settled in Vailor 27 years ago!
• Your character can't posses any sort of  magic in your application.
• Your application is quite short, frankly. The usual size us two medium paragraphs. Would you kindly expand them?
• Except the mentioning of Kal'Akash, no other lore is used. Please add more to it. Feel free to use our wiki about our current realm Vailor for more info! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor
• You're missing personality traits. This helps build our your character!
• Please add more to your ambitions.

You may re-apply in 24 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need additional help!

[Crowbill 493]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.