[Denied] [Pending][Application] RetroGriffen

[RetroGriffen 1]

 

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Retrogriffen

How old are you?: 12

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yep!

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I have, yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Keeping the server PG-13. For those of us that are under the age of 13 it is nice to have the server being friendly and good for everyone.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? My older brother plays it, he is Stormclank

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is where you are playing as a character and being  them. It isn't just pretending to be a person, it is fully acting like them with everything you do in the game.

What is metagaming?: Knowing something that you wouldn't know in character. Like bob can't see people through walls.

What is powergaming?: Making yourself OP! It's buffing up your person when they aren't actually buff. An example is like, *stabs and kills him instantly.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Gustaf

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Highlander

Character’s age: 32

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):  

Gustaf's  parents were killed by orcs..

 

Uh.. Nah just joking. Gustaf grew up in the city of Saltstone, born to a normal family. His father served as a blacksmith for Lord Bryce Vimmark and his mother worked the tavern as a barmaid. He learnt to fight at a fairly young age and started his training early too.  The life around Saltstone is generally cold so he is quite used to the icy temperatures from that. Gustaf's deep northern accent is also because of him originating from Saltstone. He lived a very pleasant life until the age of 16 when he went to live as a mercenary.

 

His service as a mercenary went very well for the first few years. He found himself a place in with the caliphate and they paid him well. Gustaf worked there until his contract ended and then he really just went around and lurked wherever he could, looking for jobs and such. That is what he does now, just looking for mercenary jobs.

 

Personality Traits: He is quiet yet loud in battle. Gustaf is mostly comfortable around the people that he likes and admires. He is generally awkward around others that  he doesn't know. Gustaf is kind and caring but also a little selfish.

Ambitions: He aims to join the Varygian order and become part of the Vallbergs. Gustaf wants to eventually become a High ranking officer in the order and have a nice house with a nice amount of food and beer.

Strengths/Talents: He can handle a sword and shield well from all of his training so he is as good as any other standard footman.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Not very good when it comes to reading and speaking to people. Gustaf was trained mostly in martial combat instead of reading and writing.

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight):  Gustaf is fairly tall but nothing more than the average man of his age, he stands at about 5'6ft but is fairly muscular due to his profession. His dirty brown hair covers the sides of his head but not the top because of his receeding hairline. Sadly for him he has a large scar down his face from one of his mercenary jobs gone bad.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):

 

[Crowbill 493]

Under review

[Crowbill 493]

Good job on the app! However, some changes need to be made:

• Your metagaming defintion is vague. Please expand on it. Feel free to consult our wiki page about metagaming here! https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying
• Your biography is quite dry. Could you add one more paragraph about your journeys and the events that happened to you?
• Your strengths and weaknesses are not even. Could you add more to them?

You have 24 hours to make your changes. Once finished, message me. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

 

[Crowbill 493]

You have been denied for following reasons:

• Applicant failed to make needed changes in the set time period.

Fear not, as you may re-apply in 12 hours. Feel free to contact me or any other AT via forums or Teamspeak if you need help!

[Crowbill 493]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.