[✗] Application

[ActionKnight56 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: 11809

How old are you?: 14

What timezone are you in?: Pacific TIme

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No advantage mods

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): I don't know where the edit button is on the forums.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was trying to find RP servers

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): [Denied] application

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: looking through the eyes of another player

What is metagaming?: knowing information that the character you are playing as doesn't know

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: forcing an action

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Nimue Torzorwyn

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Female

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Wood Elf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 159

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) She came from the ancient homeland of the elves, Princedom of Malinor. When the conclave came, she and her parents went to the state of Laureh'lin, for protection. After the revolt against the High Elves came, A High and Dark Elf Assassins (one of each) came and murdered both of her parents. Years passed, she soon became an Ranger and hunted down the killers of her parents. she was unsuccesful for many decades. Now she is an assassin for hire, and she is living in Sancuary in a lonely house in the middle of a forest. As the years passed, she studied swordplay and archery as any other ranger would. Back then, her mother was very clever, and that passed on to Nimue. Sometimes Nimue would wander around the forest or even a nearby city, and she would see if she would find anything that is going - such as a theft or an assassination in progress - and she would deliver stop the villainy that is happening.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) She helps all who are in danger, loves natural food/grown food (example: apples), doesn't trust assassins,

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) A reputation as an Ranger that protects others from harm.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Swordplay, Being Stealthy, Archery, Clever, Acrobatics

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Short-tempered, Bare Handed Combat, Doesn't trust assassins

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) She has a dark outfit, she is 4 feet and 6 inches tall, she has brown hair, and no scars

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

-Your power-gaming and meta-gaming definitions are incorrect.

 

-Your character's biography is poorly written, and incoherent, leaving out many crucial parts of your character's life.

 

-Having one's character's parents randomly killed by random unnamed characters is extremely overused, and cliche. IF you wish to have your character's parents die needlessly, please suply a better reason for such.

 

-You note your character being a ranger, than an assassin, and than a ranger again. Yet than you say she stops crime... This is rather confusing.

 

-Your character's strengths and weaknesses are unbalanced. 

 

-Not trusting assassins isnt a weakness, its common sense.

 

-You need to provide a screenshot of your character's minecraft skin.

 

-You may re-apply in 24 hours.

 

-Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.