[Denied]My second application

[robert29 63]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

robert29

-How old are you?:

16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

London, England

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

No one is perfect but it is my first language and I have formal qualifications in the English language and it's literature, so I think my English will be sufficient.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am an imaginative and humorous person, I enjoy designing as well as sport and computers. I play a lot of games and particularly enjoy role playing.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

About 10+ hours a week.

-How long have you played minecraft?:

I purchased Minecraft shortly after Alpha was released and have played since then.

-What do you know about roleplaying?:

Role-playing is assuming the role of a particular, usually fictional, character.

I also know that it is important to have a good knowledge and understanding of your character in order for it to be successful and enjoyable for yourself and those you interact with.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect the server will contain people who wish to experience Minecraft in a way that they enjoy greatly.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have played on many Minecraft servers, I have spent a fair amount of time on Team9000’s server as well as Minesworn. I left the previous servers because I became bored of their repetitiveness and looked for a server that would offer a new Minecraft experience. Minesworn, being a faction-based server, offered what I was looking for until the faction I was in disbanded.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

I have.

-Name the 4 races on this server:

The Humans, the Dwarves, the Elves, and the Orcs.

-How did you hear about us?:

I was searching for role-playing servers.

-Did you vote?:

I will vote when I have experienced the server as I believe it to be unfair on the other servers for me to vote without properly playing on the server.

-What was your favourite Law?:

‘-Buildings must adhere to the structural architecture of the area, if you are designing a new structure it must look functional and attractive. Buildings that block paths, destroy the atmosphere, serve no purpose or are an eyesore will be removed after a warning.’ I really like this law, it adds to the atmosphere and enhances the experience for everyone. This law, from what I have seen, has been well enforces resulting in a beautiful-looking server.

-What was your least favourite Law?:

To me, all the laws are well thought out by experienced players and they all add to making a great server.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

Rogorin

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Rogorin, son of Thogrin.

-What is your Race?:

Dwarf

-Biography:

I am Rogorin, son of Thogrin. I am a noble member of the dwarf race and I work as a blacksmith, following the tradition of men in my family. I am skilled in the art of blacksmithing, the traditional techniques taught to me by my father from a young age have made my weapons and armour famous within my community. I am also experienced in fighting, I spend my evenings practicing martial techniques with the weapons I construct. I have no remaining family and live by myself above my blacksmith’s. My mother was born in a small town in the outskirts of Kal’Urguan, she fled her home because of increasing numbers of Orc attacks to the safety of inner Kal’Urguan, where she met my father and raised me. I have no siblings as my mother died shortly after I was born, my father did not set his eyes on the elegant beard of a dwarven lady after her death; he was deeply saddened for the remainder of his years and left me to tend to the family shop alone. I have learned great wisdom from the many travellers I have served and often share this wisdom with those I commune with. However, as tensions have risen between the races I have found my business becoming increasingly scarce of travellers.

-Character Age:

102

-Character Appearance:

I am average Dwarf size, I have large muscles and hands from my many years blacksmithing. I have Blue eyes and long light brown hair and a healthy beard. I normally wear my blacksmiths’ clothes as I rarely have time to change out of them when I’m not working.

-Character Personality:

I am a very proud Dwarf, my trade has taught me to be attentive and patient. I am patriotic and distrustful of magic and sorcery. I have a good sense of humour and enjoy socialising over a pint of beer with my friends.

-Your ambitions:

I have spent many years learning my trade, I have recently realised my mortality and wish to travel and experience the wonders I have been told of by passive travellers. However, I feel compelled to continue my family’s tradition and serve my race in these dark times.

-Can your character read or write?:

I can read and write to a extent that is useful to me, as a blacksmith my reading and writing is limited to dealing with customer orders.

-Can your character mine?:

All dwarfs can mine, it is in their blood. Some are better than others, I fall on the lower end of the mining scale.

-Are you a capable builder?:

My blacksmithing has taught me careful planning and technique, this has resulted in me being a great builder.

-Can you wield a sword?:

I am experienced in many forms of weaponry, I personally prefer an axe though.

-Enjoy Farming?:

Farming is for the women.

-Does your character have any special skills?:

I am greatly skilled in blacksmithing and combat.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Attached-

-Other Information:

-Out of character-

Thank you for taking the time to read my request.

This is my second attempt at a good application, I am determined to be accepted and so I would appreciate some feedback if the application is still not adequate.

Many thanks,

Rogorin

[Tyrion 119]

Denied

Please look over

Chevailer's Application Form to make sure you have not missed anything. If you believe that you have not, please try to improve your application by improving on the overall layout and maybe make a longer biography.

You will need to change up your biography. We do not have "The Ered Luin" in Aegis or the wars that you have talked about. Keep it within our lore.

[robert29 63]

Denied

Please look over

Chevailer's Application Form to make sure you have not missed anything. If you believe that you have not, please try to improve your application by improving on the overall layout and maybe make a longer biography.

You will need to change up your biography. We do not have "The Ered Luin" in Aegis or the wars that you have talked about. Keep it within our lore.

Thank you for reviewing my application.

I have altered my bio, I hope it is sufficient.

Rogorin

[Trouvo 205]

you should reread the rules, you can not just edit and expect it to be re-read, you must wait 3 days before submitting a new application

[robert29 63]

you should reread the rules, you can not just edit and expect it to be re-read, you must wait 3 days before submitting a new application

Ok, thanks for telling me. I only replied because I've seen it done before (example below)

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/22226-aupherans-application/

Wouldn't it be easier for Tyrion to read my edited bio then another person to have to read through the whole thing?

Rogorin