The Tale Of Dom

[Urahra 5779]

((Removed.))

[Alex_Pan 112]

I noticed this at 11pm. Gonna read it tomorrow, but if I start now I'm going to keep putting off sleep.

[Sultan 3953]

(its good if u are going to continue don't forgot that dom is a shaman and read the Clan wars.

were the clan of dom and the clan of rax fought.

[moondoggy 27]

sweet:D i can't wait to see what happens next with Dom!

[Urahra 5779]

(its good if u are going to continue don't forgot that dom is a shaman and read the Clan wars.

were the clan of dom and the clan of rax fought.

Oh, is that true? I didn't know that. I guess Clan Dom was a shaman clan? I just figured that Or'ta and his kin were shamans, but that didn't mean Dom herself was a shaman.

But no worries, I can fix it. This is about her early youth. It could be that she didn't become a shaman until later

[Sultan 3953]

Oh, is that true? I didn't know that. I guess Clan Dom was a shaman clan? I just figured that Or'ta and his kin were shamans, but that didn't mean Dom herself was a shaman.

But no worries, I can fix it. This is about her early youth. It could be that she didn't become a shaman until later

(the other thing is dont take the http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/8879-the-clash-of-clans-story-feel-free-to-comment/ Clan wars history as the complete truth, as you know history is wrote by the victory's not the defeated. Gorkil sided with Dom in the conflict I found it very nice that gorkil was the first to hold his sister. Also the 4 brothers mother was the favored mate of Krug and they were his favored children. you could fit it in later i gusses with the achivemnt of the brothers there father favored there mother.)

(if u need more info ts or msg me in forum and im glad to help)

[Urahra 5779]

((thanks for that. I was looking on the wiki for information and found very little. So I just decided to start making stuff up. Like I said, I took liberties with the story and characterization. And there's more story to come.))

[Cooonie 55]

(( Beautiful story, just straight out beautiful. I am excited to hear what is next! ))

[Urahra 5779]

Updated.

[Urahra 5779]

Updated.

[Ned Lud 1260]

This is great. I'd love to see our ancestral lore fleshed out a bit more. Keep up the awesome story-telling. I'd like to see us to get more into this traditional story-telling stuff in-game from time to time.

Mogroka, where can I read up on the relations between Gorkil and Dom? I don't think I've run across any of that information.

[Urahra 5779]

AND IT IS FINISHED.

There you go, everyone. The Tale of Dom, finally complete. Took a long time, but I'm pretty proud of it, not gonna lie.

[Ned Lud 1260]

Amazing read, seriously. I usually don't have the patience for long-winded fan-fictions, but this kept my interest. And no, I don't hate you. I'll smuggle you some pork-chops or something when Warlord's not looking.

[DecoLamb 959]

...I noticed something..

Grahla is a redhead

Dom is a red head

Krug seemed to really like red heads

Mirabelle is a red head..

Lothriel is a red head..

Mogroka likes red heads..

Orcs dye their hair with the blood of their victims in hopes of it gaining a red sheen..

Oh gawd.. THE ORCS! THEY ARE BECOMING GINGERS!

This means we are immune to the Undead taint! You can't taint a soul that isn't there!

[Austin 697]

Does this mean Robin is achually a Orc???