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[Magic Lore] Elysari - the Shieldmaidens of Saphiel's Everspring

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I didn't read but it is Aelesh so just accept please : 3 

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Saphiel, My Beloved. Was hoping someone would get around to doing the shield maiden stuff w her I had been told about. Looking forward to the read

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This looks really interesting, I'll give it a full read and feedback later. 

update: I forgot to ever come back and actually write a reply here! But I really like this piece. I think more support/defensive focused magic could be good. I do wish it played a little more with the idea of performing small miracles, like say.. when an archer never seems to run out of arrows. Not that a spell like that would work well on LOTC, but the motif of small, easily missed miracles is interesting.

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The effort in this piece was incredibly creative, productive and especially tremendous; I’m forever happy to be invited and involved in this project.
 

One way or another, I’m rooting for this piece to be accepted and hopefully witnessed by a larger audience. Aelesh, and all the other contributors to this project really deserve that much love.

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I don't understand a single word in this lore post but it looks sick as hell. Accept this now.

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I like it, but...

 

(Full feedback after I've had dinner, watch for post edit)

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Now this is some thing I scanned the poste and well

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I gave it a nice thorough reading! This is chock full of PEAK. I really dig the ideas presented & I think you achieved finding a niche that has yet to be explored! Nice work bud!

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Genuinely my favorite magic i've read for a while, makes sense and is easy to read, +1
Also the vibes are SO good omg?? Love this tbh pop off

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neat. i had workshopped an elysari write myself some months ago, and it's interesting how we came to similar ideas (though executed far differently).

it has the main bullet point i think a magic drawn from saphiel needs, namely that it is almost purely defensive. mercy girl shouldn't be helping fools brain each other.

i like it! i like the direction and the theming. in terms of balance, i thought cleric was egregiously busted, and elysari just seem overall weaker than clerics (albeit they're doing completely different things and fulfilling different roles), so i don't see anything in here that springs up at me as overly strong.

i might suggest putting spell info into spoilers though, just to break up the absolute volume of text, but maybe i'm just too old head. some lines between each spell wouldn't go amiss either, alternatively.

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A cut above the rest as usual old friend, so glad I happened upon it amongst the hundreds of notifications since I was on the forums last, what a blessing 🙏 hope you're well brother.

 

P.S: Aelesh should have Lore Master lore

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