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Lets hope someone doesnt steal this. +1

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Wraith gonna be raking my draconic heel with its wraith teeth cuhhhh

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Waiter! Waiter! one CA please!

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On a brief reading of this:

Its actually heat

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Really impressive prose! +666

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Overall I think this is a good CA, but honestly I think it suffers from these two issues.

 

1. I think that Draconic Sacrilege is utterly pointless and hides a fun aesthetic over a frankly hyper rare material.

2. I think you need to clarify if darkstalkers and liches who have been given elevation can help with the ritual. Getting 5 T5 necros is a struggle at the best of times. Letting the CAs be stand and would just be something required.

 

That isn't to speak of some of the Balancing issues which arise within the spells itself. Darkening's strength drain should not wear off after 2 emotes. Eclipse Mantle should last longer then 3 emotes. Everdrain should be knowledge locked. 1 cast of the spell per ooc is bleh should be 2 or even 3.

 

Additional questions ariss. Can pre made Blighted lands be used in creation? Why does new blighted land need to be made? Feels like a process in a half if you need to remake a blight totem? Compared to wight and Zar akal as end game CAs the creation here is just tedious and mildly annoying (it is cool though in how it has to be done. I'm just speaking logistically).

 

If you have lost spell slots from other magics (since losing slots now is a think I suppose. The biggest one that comes to mind is nazthrak), can you still become a wraith? Or does not having that lost slot now bar you from the CA. (Frankly I think this should not add any additional slots and a wraith should be allowed to keep 2 spell slots so they can express their magical acumin in different ways).

 

In summary I think it is okay but it suffers from being weak as hell for what should be one of the most terrifying player CAs to encounter. People will probably over hype it a bit in the comments as they tend to do. You wrote this with the same mentality of Abyssal of "aim low amend high" which just makes the whole Magic and creature mildly unappealing, which in the end is just more disappointing then it is annoying.

 

Edit: for the aurum weaknesses, 1 ingot weapons are like, nothing. everything which people actually use as weapons are 2/3 inogts. Plus the symmetry hit mechanic where if stabbed with a gold dagger on one arm for it to then carry over to the other WITH a stun is just nasty brutal. You strike them with gold, stun them, and then your friend delivers another major blow and they die in 2 emotes. Frankly I feel like wraiths should be immune to all mundane weapons, for they are just shadow smoke monsters. Let them be hard to take down and dreadful if gold can be so debilitating.

 

Edit: ya werewolf is right

 

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Pretty chill came out at a great time I was just wondering the other day huh I wonder when the necro endgame ca will come out 

 

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this is nice can i play one?

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these r like the shitty version of wights

 

buff them breh why did u guys write wraiths as weak chuds isn’t this an end game CA

 

just cuz LT like to nerf stuff doesn’t mean u gotta write them like cucks from the beginning

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1 hour ago, Werew0lf said:

these r like the shitty version of wights

 

buff them breh why did u guys write wraiths as weak chuds isn’t this an end game CA

 

just cuz LT like to nerf stuff doesn’t mean u gotta write them like cucks from the beginning

90% of my treelord compile [endgame druid ca] is "please stop making them as strong as other endgame cas! please make them comparable to T1 druids but wood instead of flesh :3" voters are infected w/ zhuilk "pass weak buff never"

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8 hours ago, PrimnyaQuorum said:

90% of my treelord compile [endgame druid ca] is "please stop making them as strong as other endgame cas! please make them comparable to T1 druids but wood instead of flesh :3" voters are infected w/ zhuilk "pass weak buff never"

Ya but treelords are lame good guy tree man while wraiths are giga chad, "strikes fear into the entire army" type creature.

 

So sob and weep tree lover!

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