[Denied]IverCraft's 3 application

[IverCraft 13]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:

IverCraft

How old are you?:

13 soon 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

European time zone.

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:

Yes or I think so at least.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:

Yes I have played some other but they only had small versions.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:

Yes I have read them and I fully understand them.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:

My brother told me about it.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/70255-ivercrafts-application/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:

It is to go out of how you really is and act as any one you want to. Like you can be a princess or a dwarf. What ever you'd like.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:

In my own words I think Meta- Gaming is when a player have information that is not in- game and using it to his/her advantage.(E.G Talking to friends that have characters in different races.)

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:

Power- Emoting is when using emotes or other things to make your character hard or impossible to beat in a fight. It cane also be being good at everything such as good at farming and also a great warrior.

In-Character Details

Character Name:

Rose Irllin

Character Race:

Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

My name is Rose Irllin and I am 42 years old. When I were a child I learned to love the forest and all living creature. I will never attack any one unless its the only option but when I do fight I am very good with the bow.

She now walking around in the country looking at all the forests and helping any one that she can. But

What are your characters ambitions?:

To live life in harmony.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

I'll post link to the skin cause the screen shot is to big to load it says.

http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/290757/elf-girl/

http://www.minecraftskins.com/newuploaded_skins/skin_2012090208140320717.png

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:

No I dont think so. But I really hope you accept it this time. I really want to be able to join this server.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

Rose looks at what the old dwarf have and notice some nice arrows. She then notice shes low and starts to talk "How much is there for those arrows you got there?" The old dwarf eyes turn soft and big as he

realize that he will get some money finally. "50 minas." Rose hands him the money and continue to walk away.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

Wake the monk up and try to reason with the Orc to make him/her leave without making an fight. And if the Diplomatic approach does not work I threaten the Orc and force him/she to leave the Dwarf alone.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

She walks up to the man telling him "Do you need some help?" the man then answers yes and Rose breaks off a stick to him and help him pick up the money again.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

You were denied for the following reasons:

Your biography is still too short, add more detail. Add some server lore to your biography. For your Open Response Questions, add more substance. They seem a little rushed. Take the time to really develop your character in the specific situations. Add more dialogue and actions. Your biography also seems unfinished. Good luck on your next application.

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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