[Denied][Denied]kivishregiden's application

[kivishregiden 1]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: apmaxwell

How old are you?: 12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: US

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, but very little. one other MC roleplay server.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I googled "minecraft roleplay server".

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/70822-kivishregidens-application/page__p__567962__fromsearch__1#entry567962 and also http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/70947-kivishregidens-application/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is when a group of people get together, whether physically or virtually, and pretend to be players that they invented beforehand. Roleplaying is usually extrememly non-linear.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta-gaming is using information from outside the game to influence the game. (this is a summary of the Wikiapedia article on meta-gaming. I hadn't enchountered the term before.)

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: If a server has "emoting" enabled, then power-emoting is emoting in such a way that the emotes have a negative effect on another player. (This is also a summary of Urbandictionary.com and Wowwiki's definitions.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Kivish Regiden (his old name Clabar is only used in his backstory.)

Character Race: Mountain dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

History

When Clabar was a young dwarf, he lived deep in the eastern swamp with his two parents. He was an only child, and he enjoyed gazing westward, wondering about the Cloud Temple he had heard about from a traveling monk. His parents had never told him about it, and he wondered why not. He was about to find out. The day after his 16th birthday, his father took him to a cave. The inside was lined with obsidian, and his father ordered him to bow down to a statue of a scaled monster. He was horrified. The traveling monk had also told him about the worshippers of Iblees, and Clabar now knew that his father was of their ranks.

He fled from the cave. His father was too startled by his son's reaction to pursue immediatly. However, Clabar knew that soon he would be followed. He sprinted home and started to pack food for a long journey. He knew that he could not continue to live with his parents. He avoided his mother - no doubt she would detain him. With a heavy heart he set off for the Cloud Temple, where he hoped to gain shelter. The next three days were horrible. He had barely any head start on his father, so he departed immediately. He led a winding route, crossing streams and doubling back to confuse pursuit When he crossed his trail, he could see his father's tracks beside his own. Frightened, he doubled his pace. He knew that he could find haven in the Cloud Temple.

Appearance

During the days spent recuperating in the Temple, he changed his name to Kivish Regiden. He grew his first beard, braiding it and draping it over one shoulder, and stopped shaving his eyebrows. He removed his mustache, and donated all of his old clothes to charities. A fortunately timed growth spurt further altered his appearence, allowing him to pass for a short human.

Personality

He blames Iblees and all of his followers for the loss of his parents, and hates them for it. He learned to think about everything coldly and rationally and to exert a granite will over his thoughts and feelings. He is secretive and does not gain freinds easily. He overestimates his fighting prowess. He is overly grim for sixteen years old. He believes that the ends justifty the means, and is not above minor criminal activity to help the attempts to wipe out the worshippers of Iblees.

What are your characters ambitions?: Kivish wants to destroy the worshippers of Iblees. He hopes to find his parents and convince them that they have chosen the wrong religion, although he realizes that there is very little chance of doing so.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:Please check my other applications - I have run out of attachment space ("global upload quota").

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Nothing that I can think of.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?If I'm not on a errand of my own, I offer to help him. If he accepts, I run errands for him, organize his shop, advertise, and help him in any other way I can find. While I am helping in his shop, I pocket some small trinkets and a few minas, making sure to take very little so that he won't notice later. I reason that destroying the temples of Iblees is surely far more important than the success of a single shopkeeper, and besides, it's not like I ruined his livelihood.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I walk over and politely ask the orc to leave the temple. He turns and snarls something at me, then turns back to the dwarf. Oh well, it's not my business. I start to walk away, when something changes my mind. With all my strength, I swing the flat of my axe at the back of the orc's knee. The joint buckles, and it takes several seconds for the orc to regain his balance. By that time, the dwarf and I are far down the path out of the sanctuary. He starts to pursue us, then thinks better of it.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:I draw my axe to chop a new walking stick for him. Then I help him up, surreptitiously pocketing a generous handful of the coins at the same time. The money, as always, will go towards wiping out the worshippers of Iblees. I tie the hole in the bag shut, or transfer it to another bag if I have one, then walk off towards Malinor. I reflect that while I am comfortable taking a few coins here and there, I have never taken all the money someone has, and never plan to.

[Hylian the Heretic 233]

Denied:

-Your ORQs are better, but you need a villain app to steal. (Pardon me if this has changed slightly in applying.)

-Your definition of power-emoting isn't quite correct. Think more along the lines of how it could be unfair.

-Other than that, your application's pretty good. Please wait 24 hours and re-apply :)

Feel free to PM me any questions.

[Hylian the Heretic 233]

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