[Denied][Dwarf] Donald O'conner 5Th Application Attempt

[Dakios 0]

 Minecraft Account Name: Dakios

How old are you?:19

Time-Zone:GMT

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:I played half-life 2 role play on a Garry's mod server for over 10 hours.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:

My Brother said it was cool and i should check it out.

 

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: 

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/82637-dwarf/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/82702-dwarf-donald-oconner/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/82712-dwarf-donald-oconner-3rd-application-attempt/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/82820-dwarf-donald-oconner-4th-application-attempt/

 

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):

 

Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:

I played a large amount of skyrim but unfortunately they are extinct in that game ,yet i have read pretty much all the books on there intelligence and culture.

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing:Living the life of a fictionly player for enjoyment and helping others.

 

Meta-gaming: Using information you would never have gotten as
your character. For instance, you live as a character that has never seen a map
in his life, yet you act as if you know the whole map of by heart.

 

Power-emoting: Basically inflicting something one someone
without their consent and them not being able to do about it EG. Player one
killed Player two.

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name:Donald O'Conner

Current Age:27

Sub-race (if any):cave dwarf

Clan (if any):

 

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

​There is not much to tell about Donald his farther and mother owned a tavern which was the heart and soul of there lives so one day decided he would leave to set up shop else were by himself and become a true dwarf ,he spent many years wondering the caverns below Kal'Karik along his way he wrote journals of the people he met and the ale he drank.Until he finally made it to Karik and decided to set up shop there and sell his home brew to the entire Dwarven capital.

 

Until one day an Orc wondered in to his establishment and offered him a deal give all his goods to him free of charge or die a slow and painful death . So he Grabbed a ale Mug and smashed him over the head with it and handing the Orc in to a group of Dwarven Head Hunters to be "disposed of" this event allowed him to make connections with the other civilizations such as Half-lings and human as they were also victims of the Orc.

 

Ambitions for the Future:
He has always had a dream to become a political leader to become an important part of society and to make a contribution to the world.While expanding the family business in the progress.

 

Personality:Brave, intelligent, conversationalist

 

Skills:can usually talk his way out of anything, knows how to run a business

 

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):

Any other details you wish to share about your character: trims beard regularly

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access the deposit. What do you do?

 

Answer: i see if there is anyone else around to help me build another bridge if not i will throw a large rock on to the bridge to see how much weight it can with stand which will then result in me either running across or marking the area on my map  and returning for supplies yet hiding it under a layer of smooth stone so only i know of its location , so i can return and use the diamonds to sell for my further profit and expansion in the ale industries. 

 

2. You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to approach the young dwarf. What do you do?

 

Answer: Considering i only drink in my own tavern ,i would go over sit down next to the dwarf and if the men continued to make there way over i would say turn around and say "hey fellows whats occurring?" and they would reply "that dwarf there owes our boss 50 minas" to which i would reply " Here take it and go i don't want any trouble, i would do this because i am a man of the people and will do anything to protect a fellow Dwarven brother form harm".

 

3. Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?

 

Answer:I say "Sounds Good to me, old chum for the record i hope this is on the house then!"

to which he will reply "for an old pal like yourself i think we can make a deal over some fine brew"

to which we throw each others arms over each others shoulders and walk in to the bar laughing a great big beards off!

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

Your application has been...

 

 

 

 

Hello. After reading through your application I've decided to deny it for the following reasons:

 

 

You seem to have misunderstood the "Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?" question. This server is not based of off Skyrim or any of the Elder Scrolls series, it has it's own lore.

 

 

Please expand and add some more lore to your biography. Here is a link to the wiki to help you find some more lore! http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/

 

Please expand on all of your Open Response Questions, I found them rather short.

 

Various grammatical, capitalization and spelling mistakes throughout your whole application. If you can, put the application through Word and check for spelling mistakes.

 

 

 

Unfortunately, this is your fifth denied application, which means that you have to wait 1 month from this post. This means that you can post your new application on 2 April 2013. If you post it before that time, your ban time will be expanded.

 

 

If you have any questions, pop me a PM.

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

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