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OOC  Information
 
 
Minecraft Account Name: paintballz
 
How old are you?: 16 years.
 
Time-Zone: Mountain Time Canada.
 
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: I have, and I agree to them.
 
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I’ve played on a few RP servers including: Crafthammer, Hollowworld, and Rise of Kings. and I also play DnD
 
How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: My friends: Juno_Ax, Wikkat, Tuslwmonster,  zXzMAGIIKzXz, and Zelnok
 
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:
 
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above)
My forum name is dudewhereismymount12
 
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make
use of it and follow it in your biography?: I shall :3
 
 
Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take
any definitions from elsewhere!:
 
Role-playing:
Just a really fun thing to do with friends! It’s much like acting, but in many ways very, very different. You immerse yourself in a character YOU create, not some character from a play script. You get to play their life out, make a story from their actions, and have a whole bunch of fun while doing it!
 
Meta-gaming:
Meta gaming is when you know something your character wouldn't be able to know. A common one used for examples is when you look at someone’s name plate above their head, and know exactly where and who they are. Your character wouldn't be able to know these things.
 
Power-emoting:
 When people in character do things that are incredibly Over-powered, as in abilities that make it impossible to hit someone, things that make your characters, and other nonsense that overpowers them in roleplay. It is also emoting so fast that the person you are roleplaying with can’t emote back in time.
 
 
In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character
 
Full Name: Maciver Snow
Current Age: 28
Sub-race (if any): Adunian
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):
Maciver Snow, was born on a cold night in the north. His father was a proud warrior, and his power was known all around the north. His mother was a Northern bastard who died soon after his birth. When he was 8 his father married a woman from the south and took her up north to meet the family, Maciver wasn’t trusting or accepting of her, and refused to speak to her, he used his anger to train himself in sword fighting putting the energy into every strike and stab.  Soon he met Aaangr, a boy who also shared his interest in sword fighting, and trained with him. He soon grew to become good friends with Aaangr. His teenage years were filled with drink, women, fighting, and swords. On a warm summer day, he walked upon the wall of his small village and saw black smokestacks coming from the farms in the distance, soon after the guards came and set up a unit of men to go attack from horseback,  Maciver, begged and begged his father to allow him to fight alongside the guards, his father allowed him, he quickly strapped on his armor, but before he could leave the house his father’s wife stopped him and handed him a big object wrapped in cloth, when he unwrapped it he saw a long bastard sword, with a hilt dark as the night, with a wolf on it howling. Then she said something he will never forget: “A bastard sword for the bastard” then pushed him out the door, leaving his half brothers and sisters behind.  When they met the bandits in combat the 10 men of the guard were defeated, as Maciver fought he turned to his side and watch a bandit chop off his father’s head, Maciver filled with rage, ran at the man and killed him after a long and bloody fight. The battle was won, but the scars never healed.
Maciver has long dark brown hair, and icy blue eyes, his skin pale and his heart filled with anger.
(I couldn’t think anything more to add to the backstory, so Instead I wrote a RP example. )
 
-Maciver sits under the light of a single torch he silently opens a leather book on the clover the Family Sigil of his father- never rested my eyes on this night, I don’t trust anyone in this damn waste of land. I bribed the local farmer, with my coins, he agreed to get me home, one stop at a time, the cold wind is comforting…
-A loud knock on the door of the small inn room-
Maciver: Come…
-Farmer walks in dressed in ripped clothes, carrying a small torch-
Farmer:  Sir Snow, I-
Maciver: I ain’t a knight fool, now speak.
Farmer: The horses are staddled and ready to go outside, our last ride.
Maciver: Good… be gone now. A bastard needs his thoughts.
-Farmer leaves-
-Maciver takes his sword by the handle and looks over the dark as night hilt, and the bright silver blade, and lastly he runs his fingers over the wolf craving-
-Maciver mounts and rides-
 
Ambitions for the Future:  Bed as many women as possible, drink, and fight.
 
Personality: 
Quick-to-anger, strong, dark, depressed, loyal, honorable.
 
Skills: Swordfighting, basic bow and trapping, and how to maintain armor and weapons.
 
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):
(it should work this time, if it doesn’t send me a PM ASAP)
 
Any other details you wish to share about your character: N/A
 
 
Open-Response-Questions
Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.
____
 
1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace – he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do? 
 
Answer:
Maciver walks around the huge city, not comfortable with how huge it is. He spies a man in dark clothes sneaking around. He quickly strides over to the man, stopping him.
"Oi! Wha’ are ye' doin’?"
The man draws a sword he had hidden under his dark cloak.
Man: "Watch yourself! This isn’t your business!"
Maciver: "Watch yer words. Ye have no idea who yer messin’ with.”
Maciver draws Night's Bite (his bastard sword from his storyline) and points it at the man.
Maciver: “Ye sure ‘bout this, lad?”
The dark man charges at Maciver, his sword held high above his head. He swings downward, aiming for the bastard's head. The Adunian steps to the side, narrowly missing the man’s blow. He swings, trying to slash the man’s chest wide open. His opponent's sword hits the ground full-force, shards of the blade flying as it made contact. With wide eyes, he holds the hilt in his hand. His eyes flash to Maciver in fear. He smiles and swings his blade at the man’s calves, trying to make him fall to the ground. He jumps, avoiding Maciver's blade, and stumbles. He quickly scrambles onto his feet and attempts to run away. Maciver quickly recovers from the swing and runs.. The guards look at the man, then back to Maciver. The man looks up at the guards and moans, his head throbbing. The guards, who had witnessed the fight, each picked up the man by an arm and dragged him away, still a little shaken.
 
2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?

 



i see the man, and notice he will not be able to defend himself. He gets the idea, I can’t kill them both, but I can most likely scare them off.. I get out of hiding and walk over my fur coat

covering my shoulders. take a quick sip from my dark leather ale-skin and looks

up from the skin.



Maciver:  Now Now gentlemen, can’t we solve this problem without blood?

 

Bandit 1:  Human! Back off now!

-Maciver laughs to himself walking over to the side of the bandit placing a hand on his shoulder-


 

Maciver:  Im no human now.. watch ye’ self!


Human: You bas-

-Quickly grabs the back of his head, and pushes him as hard as he can into the other bandit knocking them both to the ground-

-draws his sword running to protect the old man and raises his voice-


Maciver: Leave him now!
 

 

-The bandits run off into the forrest and maciver walks off

 

shortly after-

 

 

 

 

 

 

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall.You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of

general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no
set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What doyou do? (Explain:your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that
happens).

Answer:

 


 

Answer:



 



 



i see the man, and notice he will not be able to defend



himself. He gets the idea, I can’t kill them both, but I can
most likely scare



them off.. I get out of hiding and walk over my fur coat
covering my shoulders.



I take a quick sip from my dark leather ale-skin and looks
up from the skin.



 



 



Maciver:  Now Now



gentlemen, can’t we solve this problem without blood?



 



 



Bandit 1:  Human! Back



off now!



 



 



-Maciver laughs to himself walking over to the side of the



bandit placing a hand on his shoulder-



 



 



Maciver:  Im no human



now.. watch ye’ self!



 



 



Human: You bas-



 



 



-Quickly grabs the back of his head, and pushes him as hard



as he can into the other bandit knocking them both to the
ground-



 



 



-draws his sword running to protect the old man and raises



his voice-



 



 



Maciver: Leave him now!



 



 



-The bandits run off into the forrest and maciver walks off



shortly after-



 



 



 



 



 



 



 



 



 



 



 



3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when



you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall.
You approach the



stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of
general goods - he says



that he is selling just about anything and that he has no
set prices. He is



willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do
you do? (Explain:



your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that
happens).



 



 



 



 



 



Answer:



 



 



-Maciver looks over the impressly large amount of items for a
small  stall in a busy city around him he
hears the various sounds of haggling and talking around him, he struggles to ay
on his guard, as he is used to villages and not huge cities but after a few
seconds of chaos he pulls himself together. He picks up a cloak , which appears
to be big but, when he unfolds it, its too short for a man of 6’7-



-Man laughs shortly- Man: We don’t have that big of cloaks



here, but we have various other items that might fit a man
of your size –looks



up at him-



Maciver:  Sharping rocks
you have em?



Man:  A few, but I don’t
think it would work well on your blade *points to the giant 1 and a half hand  sword with enough room on the hilt for 2
hands*


Maciver: I don’t care lad, whatever ye’ have.. I need.



Man: Hmm 40 minas? That’s all I can do..


Maciver: Ye’ kidding? 40 minas? That’s way too much lad..



ill give ye’ 30.



Man: 30 minas! That’s way too little! Im not a highborn! I


can’t afford that much!

 

Maciver: I don’t need ye’ busy.. good day lad..



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