[Denied][Wood Elf, Evarir Taliamonn]Bigblankpage, Application

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[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Here are some things that need to be improved if you are wanting to reapply.

 

Your meta-gaming definition is incorrect and your power-emoting definition ins't fully correct. Try to fix both of them without plagiarizing.

 

Expand on your biography. It is too short and lacks detail. You can definitely add more to your character's life to show this detail.

 

Describe your character in more detail. With what you have said I do not really get a good picture of how he looks, thinks, and acts. Add onto that and explain even the minor details. They can help a lot when describing your character in general. Painting the reader a picture when listing the tenancies and personality as well as look of your character can be an enormous help when trying to understand what your character is.

 

Make sure you post your application on the Lord of the Craft Minecraft Forums thread as well as our forums here.

 

Expand on your first and second ORQs and add more dialogue throughout both answers.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

[cruzazul 2815]

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