[Denied]Halfling Thad

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[cruzazul 2815]

 

Unfortunately your application has been denied. Below are suggestions I have listed that you should implement into your application before reapplying.

 

Your meta-gaming definition is incorrect. Feel free to use one of the many sites to find the definition but put it in your own words. Plagiarism will result in an application ban.

 

Describe your character in more detail. With what you have said I do not really get a good picture of how he looks, thinks, and acts. Add onto that and explain even the minor details. They can help a lot when describing your character in general. Painting the reader a picture when listing the tenancies and personality as well as look of your character can be an enormous help when trying to understand what your character is.

 

Your ORQs need to be a lot more detailed. A sentence will not suffice. We are looking to see how you are able to portray your character in roleplay. I'd also like to see you add more dialogue throughout the answers.

 

Add examples to all of your definitions.

 

Please wait 24 hours from this denial post before reapplying. If you have any questions don't be afraid to send me a message.

[cruzazul 2815]

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