[Denied]Whitelist Application To Loc

[GrunsterADJ 1]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: - coolkez

How old are you?: - 14

What time-zone do you live in?: - 

Have you ever roleplayed before - if you have, how?: - ive played on some other minecraft RPG servers before usually have a great time on them.

Have you been on any other roleplaying servers?: - yes

Have you applied to this server before?(Please link past applications): - no

How did you hear about us?: - just searching for minecraft RPG servers and this one caught my eye

What do you think the server will be like? - fun,exciting, at times difficult and overall a good experience

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: - yes

What’s your favourite rule / the rule you agree with the most?: - no bullying/ blackmailing other people- no one likes that.

Definitions

This is simply so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not another website / person's!

What is roleplaying?: - its when you become a charecter in a fantasy story/area and you play the game as that charecter you created.

What’s metagaming?: - almost the "foundation" of the game as the "metagaming" was made before the game was realeased. like a blueprint

What’s powergaming?: - powergaming is when you set aside your friends/normal routines and focus on nothing but for example leveling up your charecter untill it is max rank.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

What’s your character called?: - IronHammer

What race are they (and sub-race)?: - Dwarf

What sex are they?: - Male

How old are they?: - 26

Give us a brief description of their life - their story, childhood, family (Include server lore when writing):- dwarfs thouge short can live twice as long as a normal human and can lift over 300 pounds at 20 years of age. the Dwarves value their ability of forging weopons, armour, and other various everyday items. Dwarves are a great compainion in battles as they are less likely to be seen as they are short and thus they can attack from below.

   Ironhammer was a normal dwarf but was born into slavery when he and his mother were captured and he had not been born yet. ironhammer escaped at age 14 and swore to have his vengeance on those who had stolen his mother and his childhood. ironhammer will not rest till all evil has been vanquished and he has had his revenge.

What are they like (personality)?: - gruff, stern, hard, high metabolism, singing, and partyers

What are their ambitions?: - mining, forging, slaying beasts.

Do they have any special skills?: - the dwarfs are good with using axes and hammers

What are their weaknesses?: - anything that has range (bows and arrows primarily)

Give us a description of how they look (not a screenshot yet!)?: - hairy, armoured, bearded, and deffensive 

Anything else you want to say about them?: - dwarfs can be a helpfull race unless you get on thier bad side.

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: - 

 

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[ski_king3 0]

 

Unfortunately, I must deny your application. While there is certainly some improvement in your biography, there is still more which needs to be made.

 

For one, your metagaming and powergaming definitions are still incorrect. Since it appears you are having trouble finding them, I would advise you take a look here. That page will help you understand what metagaming and powergaming are, just please be sure not to plagiarize.

 

Likewise, your biography could do with a bit of work. The biography should solely describe the life of your character, not have random information pertaining to dwarves. Try to implement some of our server's lore into your biography, and remove the first paragraph. Lengthen the bit regarding your character's background somewhat significantly. If you can do this, that would help immensely.

 

Lastly, you need to use a different skin for your character. I know this was not mentioned in your previous denial, but you shouldn't be using a Honeydew skin for LotC. If you have trouble finding a suitable skin, you can always request a custom skin in the skin subforum. In fact, that's probably ideal, as custom skins tend to look better than those you'll find online.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. You may reapply 24 hours after the time on the post below this one.

[ski_king3 0]

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