lol no. Why do people keep rewriting these ****, bland ass magics that don't even work on a medium like lotc
also this spell states 'bruise or batter, or may be used to stagger and dissuade someone', however technically you could use this to easily spew out sharp objects to just 1 shot people like everyone did with the previous iteration, no?
Overall, i just see it the same as the previous lore, but with actual 'abilities' added to it. Doesn't seem to fix anything, so it's a flat -1 from me. Have a good day.