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  1. MC Name:

             iDiogen

     

    Character's Name:

             Valgrah'Yar

     

    Character's Age:

             Over 16

     

    Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

             Orc

     

    Transformed form:

             Machine Spirit

     

    Creator's MC Name:

             proddino

     

    Creator's RP Name:

             Servitos

     

    Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

             

    Machine Spirits are - akin to automatons - ones that possess a soul instead. Having a diamond within their gear heart, as well as alchemical signs that represent their very being mixed in with their lifeblood.
    These beings are fully made out of machinery, similar to their lifeless counterparts, although  were they to be destroyed, they cannot be simply rebuilt and sent back to the world. Rather, they will need to have a machine husk for their soul to inhabit once more, lest they risk permanently dying, their soul gone from the realm.
    They possess the ability to overclock, spending a couple emotes in order to overcharge themselves to become temporarily stronger, at some cost. Should they fully overclock themselves, they will risk having their body shut down.

    They may also possess quirks to their body, such as possessing more limbs at the cost of their limb strength splitting, or even things such as a finger popping out to reveal a pen, spring-loaded blades through the knuckles, and so on.

    Capable of learning magic as well, or even transferring the magic over through their soul, they cannot learn anything requiring genus or lifeforce due to their lack of it, as well as being incapable of learning any deific magics.

     

    If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

    A creation fully wrought of steel, this tall machine possesses 4 arms, splitting her Orcish strength to Human strength throughout each of these arms. Her body painted over in white, she tends to either wear her red robes, or armor colored similarly to her palette.
    Her body of hers possess certain quirks, such as spring-loaded blades, as well as a hollow barrel, although nothing too flashy.

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             N/A

     

    Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Y

     

    Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?

             Y

     

    Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

             I understand

     

    Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/227599-machine-spirit-ca-idiogen/?tab=comments#comment-1989897

  2. being around for 10 years, you pretty much grew up with this server. in what ways has lotc affected you in regards to your growth as a person, and is it positive?

     

    also whats ur taste in music

  3. MC Name:

             iDiogen

     

    Character's Name:

             Valgrah'Yar

     

    Character's Age:

             Over 16

     

    Character's Original Race (N/A if not applicable):

             Orc

     

    Transformed form:

             Machine Spirit

     

    Creator's MC Name:

             Proddino

     

    Creator's RP Name:

             Servitos

     

    Briefly explain the lore behind this construct or creature:

             

    Machine Spirits are - akin to automatons - ones that possess a soul instead. Having a diamond within their gear heart, as well as alchemical signs that represent their very being mixed in with their lifeblood.
    These beings are fully made out of machinery, similar to their lifeless counterparts, although  were they to be destroyed, they cannot be simply rebuilt and sent back to the world. Rather, they will need to have a machine husk for their soul to inhabit once more, lest they risk permanently dying, their soul gone from the realm.
    They possess the ability to overclock, spending a couple emotes in order to overcharge themselves to become temporarily stronger, at some cost. Should they fully overclock themselves, they will risk having their body shut down.

    They may also possess quirks to their body, such as possessing more limbs at the cost of their limb strength splitting, or even things such as a finger popping out to reveal a pen, spring-loaded blades through the knuckles, and so on.

    Capable of learning magic as well, or even transferring the magic over through their soul, they cannot learn anything requiring genus or lifeforce due to their lack of it, as well as being incapable of learning any deific magics.

     

    If this construct or creature has some form of aesthetic choice, can you describe how they look? 

    A creation fully wrought of steel, this tall machine possesses 4 arms, splitting her Orcish strength to Human strength throughout each of these arms. Her body painted over in white, she tends to either wear her red robes, or armor colored similarly to her palette.
    Her body of hers possess certain quirks, such as spring-loaded blades, as well as a hollow barrel, although nothing too flashy.

     

    Do you have a magic(s) you are dropping due to this app? If so, link it:

             N/A

     

    Do you agree to keep Story writers updated on the status of your magic app?:

             Y

     

    Are you aware that if this creature is shelved, your character may be given the option to revert or be indefinitely shelved?

             Y

     

    Memey RP or using this CA for subpar villain/bandit RP can lead to your app being denied, even after acceptance. Please put "I understand" as your response once you have read this part and understand the consequences.

             I understand

     

    Have you applied for this creature on this character before, and had it denied? If so, link the app:

             N

  4. 13 minutes ago, Samler said:

    The tide takes 5 emotes to make a very telegraphed attack which only pushes, no harming. Also only the strength of an orc means, orcs can brace against the spell and be unmoved.

    Ice projectile base form is a baseball, which practicly does nothing to a guy in heavy armor. You give them HEAVY BRUISING. We also got water whip, if we strike someone with this whip made of water with ice at the end, it shatters and breaks the spells if they have armor. :) Very comparible to steel weapons from a peak physical strength frost witch (ice weapons). We also got no snare spell.

    yikes y'all need a rewrite as well

  5. 1 hour ago, Samler said:

    Here is the kicker. Frost witches has more powerful magic than a water evocationists while in the cold region, outside of the cold region, it's about equal with slower casting. 

    As a joke I want to say that frost witches doing ice magic better than water evocation infringes on the older magic, which has already lost steam from the olden days.

    Has water evocation become that terrible as well? I thought they were able to cast powerful tides and push people around with great strength, as well as being able to make their projectiles blunt

  6. 6 hours ago, Cloakedsphere said:

    Why not just put the effort into finishing the rewrite? Theres quite a bit of effort exerted here that could've been used to further the rewrite along. Many hands make light work. Invite some new people, non-frost witches, to help flush out the rewrite and offer new ideas. 

    Not saying you dont deserve the bandaid. Just unsure why you wouldnt just gather some more people you can trust to help get the rewrite done faster? 

     

    the rewrite's gonna take a while. community's currently dying due to how shit current lore is and we need a bandaid fix to get through while it's finishing up

  7. 3 minutes ago, ScreamingDingo said:

    mfw predatory CA doesn't have the ability to be boss ass ***** in combat

    3 slots predatory CA that gets outperformed by a water evo mage and must only fight physically if they want a chance to win

  8. even as it stands we got nothing but flavored mundane combat for the most part, except weaker
     

    ice weapon? everyone already has a weapon

    ice dome? 3 emotes to shield yourself, you're dead by then

    ice projectile? literally as useful as a bow and arrow. pre-amendment it's even worse than a bow and arrow

     

    the only 2 good abilities are ensnare and ice spikes. but good luck finding anyone standing on snow. gotta cast ice layer and spend 3 emotes beforehand and then 2 more to ensnare them for a total of 5 emotes!

    ice spikes is semi-viable. but *sidesteps

  9. dogshit CA but we're stuck with it. might as well ******* bandaid it until we're done rewriting it. not gonna wait many more months sitting in a basement doing alchemy rp because that is the only rp i get to ******* do on this CA until the future rewrite gets finished and reviewed

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