[Denied]Application Of Myrosia

[Myrosia 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

 

The simplest section of the application. Answer these questions so we can get to know you a bit more. Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! 

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: Myrosia

How old are you?: 11 years old (started with pc since 5 years old so i got experience, dont worry) 

Have you ever roleplayed on a minecraft server before? If so, where?: Not yet, i have been looking for Roleplay servers though.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link past applications): No

 

How did you hear about us?: A friend told me about this. So i checked it out x3

What do you think the server will be like? I think it will be an amazing experience with serious roleplay and a great fantasy adventure / life story

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes, i agree and read them

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: With the sexuality/ black screen rule. There are young people who also play Minecraft. 

Do you understand combat rules, and what you can and can’t do if you do choose to roleplay as a villain?:Yes, i do

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so maybe we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): No

 

Definitions

 

These terms are a major part of the server and in a few of our rules. Please define them so that we can get an understanding of how much you know about roleplaying. Feel free to Google the answers or check on our wiki, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:  Roleplaying is getting a role and playing that role. You can choose what role you have most of the time.  ; I want to be a farmer. You get to be a farmer and have to act as realistic as possible. This is also called an RPG (Role Playing Game) This is a game which is multiplayer.

 

What’s metagaming?: Metagaming is using information your character normally does not know. ; P1: Hi, whats your name?

P2: Hi David, i am Mona. Although P2 does not know P1, he still mentions his name.

 

What’s powergaming?: Powergaming is giving no chance to the other player to react ; P1 shoots P2 with an arrow and runs away fast. Or having superpowers, like laser eyes.

 

In-Character Information

 

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that you follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

What’s your character called?: Lyra Moonstone 

 

What race are they? (and sub-race if applicable): Wood Elf

 

What gender are they?: Female 

 

How old are they?: 136 

 

Give us a highlight of their past, What life events make your character the person they are today? This is your character's biography. It is also required to include server lore when writing. (Names of towns, major server events, ect. Most lore can be found on our wiki.): My family split when i became adult. My mom came to me and said; Lyra, its time to go now, for us. You've grown up. I am very proud of you how you grew up. Now its time to take care of yourself. We have to go, go where nobody knows. Time to go now. I'll always be with you. Remember that. Dont forget to socialize, maybe talk to the high elves? You should try visit Luminaire or Abresi, and maybe you'll meet a dark elf?

You have alot to do, but got alot of time to do it all. Spend it right! After that i got left behind homeless, searching for new adventure

 

What are they like? (personality): Friendly, gets mad real fast when insulted. 

 

What are their ambitions?: Having a horse and a house.

 

Do they have any special skills? What are their weaknesses? (Try to list a few of both): Special Farming skill and jumberjack skill. I am easily knocked down, so fighting is not my specialty.

 

Give us a description of how they look?: Dirty blonde hair, blue eyes, green hoodie, brown shoes, a little tall 

 

Please give us a screenshot of your character’s skin: 

Or if it does not work http://nl.tinypic.com/r/o5q9oz/8

 

 

Good luck and thank you for applying to the server!

[Eleatic 1033]

DENIED.

 

A few issues are here regarding your app, which, for your age, is rather well made. Your definitions are correct, and so on, but you have one major flaw, or, rather, three.

 

The biography, which does include many lore locations, is rather short. A more detailed(you don't have to do it by much, another paragraph would make it perfectly acceptable so long as it fit lore). Your appearance does not fit wood elves. If anything, it would fi a more 'generic' elven race, as it does have fair skin and green eyes. The skin itself, too, is a link skin. Using a generic skin is fine, but you do need to edit it moreso than preexisting(though you were not at all judged/denied for that).

 

Your weaknesses area is, large by large, 'fine'. You list minecraft mechanics(with our plugins, that you do show a knowledge of) and a single RP example. What I want you to do in your next application is add more detail, and RP nature to your weaknesses. Your personality section is fine, if a little short, and your ambitions are nice and short.

 

Please re-apply in 24 hours, and please put this post(not mine, your app) in the 'Previous apps section) of your next app. Thank you for applying.

[Eleatic 1033]

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