[Denied] Teaspoons Applicatin

[Teaspoon 13]

This app is sorda unique and as much as iv tried it my not be right. :( but if u want evidence for some of this junk here is the links to some pages that i thing prove my lore (hopefully) Thx for all your hard work! :D http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Confectionus+Sapien  http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/The+Forbidden+Tome+Of+The+Nether+Goddess

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammaticalERRORS, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your MinecraftACCOUNT Name?:XTeaspoonX

How old are you?:15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have youAPPLIED to this server before? (Please link all pastAPPLICATIONS):

Have you read andAGREED to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:no powergaming

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:Playing the role of a character that you arnt and living how they would. 

What is metagaming?:Basically its using information that your characters would never have.

What is powergaming?:Making your character all powerfull and undiefeted. 

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name:Teaspoon

Character’s gender:male

Character’s race:Homunculi/gravern

Character’s age:before death 9 months after death 206

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

 

The year is 1133, its a dark stormy night, and inside a dark tall tower, jest outside small village that would later become the Whispering Isles. A mad alchemist is hard at work on his master creation, the perfect Minion.For many a moon he had traveled far and paid great cost to gather the perfect ingredients. The list of items he used to create his monster goes as follows.

 

*blase powder

*glistening melon 

*ground ender essence 

*pure dark matter

*One half of a soule(and were did this soul come from? lets jest say the Dr. literaly pors his heart and soule into his work.)

*the skin of a dark elf to give his creation the resosfullness and craftyness

*the fer of a kha la' pantera to give him stealth and cunning

*and last of all a Teaspoon of Cookie crumbs

 

The Mad doctor,( his name is unknown but for now we shall call him DR. Alka Seltzer) set his ingredieants into a large capsule so that the creature could grow.The liquwide in the capsule was imbued with dark magic so that the variety of ingredients would merge into a living being.

The doctor watch over and nursed his test tube baby for 9 months until his creation was at the peek of its growth and was almost ready to exit its biochamber.

The doctore was puting the last tuches on the creature preparing it for the outside atmostpheir, he wonted it to be perfect, "It has to be." He said as he looked in the direction of a small portrite on the wall of a small elf in his youth. A tremendous pounding at the door down stairs through the Dr. out of his meditative state of concentration, but only for a moment, he innored the pounding and haredly continued. The pounding was a angry Mob of villagers who where thersty for blood. During the past 9 months Dr. had performed a few experiments on the nearby village and not all of them were quite successful.The villagers lade siege to the Huge oak wood door and evetualy busted down the dore and swarmed into the cold stone tower and stormed up the crumbling staircase to the Dr. laboratory. The Mob burst into the lab not even faesing the doctor who was still hard at work on his precious creation. They sized the doctor,(much to his displeasure) and through him out a large stained glass window that over looked the village on the edge of th lake bellow. The poor Dr. fell and his what was left of his soul left him, finaly free.In a blnd rage the Mob Distroed evry thing in thier path books,potions. The doctors life work destroyed and lad wast by the raging people. The Mob then came to the chamber were the creature's biochamber was held, in a state of hibernation, completely innocent and helpless. Instantly the Mob stopped and stared in awe and wonders sight that lay before them. Some said that they should leave it alone and some said to destroy it. Some who were bold enough said that they should open the chamber and study the thing. But all of a sudden a zealous young father who had had his daughter turned blue because of the Dr.'s "medicine" rased up his sword and struck the chamber piercing it and impaling the monsters heart. The liqwide flowed out of the chamber and th little body lay lifeless as the mob carlessly moved on to destroy more of the tower and git their revenge.

 But a little old women and a few of her sons took pity on the little creature and carried the small, furry body out of the ransacked tower, down the road, past the village and into the woods were they rapped the little body in a old cloak and buried it under large mushroom in the middle of the forest ware the little monster's spirit would sleep for 200 years.The year is 1313 the cretures half soul is rased as a gravern to fufill its life's perpus.. to serve its master; The first thing i remebore was opening my eyes for the first time and behoding the world before me. But some instiinked deep inside me told me to find somthing, yes that was it but what? I then discoverd that i had the use of lembs and slowly started to crawl accross the forest flore (of course i din't no that i was in a forest at the time becouse you see i had jest ben born.) Then i saw it, the thing i was looking for and only a few feet away! Its was my master. I wobeled and derped but fanaly made my way to that thing that looked alot like me accsept i had light brown stuff stikking out the tope of its head and besids that semed to be ferless but some how i new this must be my master. Once i reched my master i found that it was laying verry still and had its eyes closed,"wht is master doing?'' i thought to myself. I diside to wate untill master opned its eyes, soo i wated. I must hav sat thir fore a good houre untill its eyes finaly oppned, and then got verry big.Master jumped up and looked at me with great fear. But hn after he had looked at me like that with his eyes so big for awile he took out a big brown thing and scooped me up and put me inside. Now i wasent qwite shure wy master was dooing this but i disided that he must have prity god reson scence he was the master. Prity soon we had come out f the orest and to a place with more things with stuff sticking out of ti head but they were much taller than master. Master started to make strange noses and the uther things tha looked like master made sounds back. I was verry confused bu i new master must no what he was doing. i poked my head out of the brown thing and look around. And thier in the hand of one of the pink things was somthing verry shinny i coldnt resist, i had to lick it! I punced out of the brown ting and snatched the thing up and stated to coress and lick it vigoresly.From then on my mster started to kall me a sound like "teaspoon" i rather liked thi sounfd becouse when ever master said it it ment that he wanted me. The years past and master tought me how to speek farly well. Master thought me his sound whic was "Turien". Me and master grew up and had meny boyish adventures and after six years Turien's brother,(that is the sounnd for the uther pink things) told him it wa time for him to make his way in the world. And me and served Master 

Turien ever sence.  

 

Personality Traits:Happy most of the time, always curious and eager to learn about the world. i'm quiet i speak when i am needed to.

Ambitions:To serve my master Turien and learn more about more about wre i came from

Strengths/Talents:I am a fast lerner and sence i was create with dark majick i am imune to it. I am olso verry stelthy    

Weaknesses/Inabilities:I will do ANYthing my master tells me.Iight majick is fatial to me. a darkness is inside me and i cant always control it.

Appearance (List the extra details ofYOUR characters appearance, IE; height & weight):

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our  screenshot  the pick below is me after death and full grown the one after that is me as a test tube baby

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

This application has been

Reasons:

• Almost unreadable, the spelling and grammar mistakes indicate a lack of proof reading
• You cannot be a homonculus, please apply as one of the four races indicated in the rules, as these characters are normally for special cases and/or event team members
• More elaboration on the homonculus, various parts are inaccurate and the lore is quite incorrect. The Whispering Isles was a city in Aegis, which is about 150-200+ years ago in our timeline.
• Do not litter your application in hyperlinks to the exact same application, it is just quite annoying and not very appealing
• Entire application needs to be re-written, it appears to be borderline trolling in my personal opinion
• Elaborate and expand upon all  definitions

Please fix these mistakes and reapply after the 24 hour denial period. PM me for any questions

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.