Vampires Introduction to LotC

[xDK 1205]

 

Vampires

(Small story)

 

Weiss Cloven closes his eyes as he leans back in his big red chair. The warmth from the fireplace in front of him, can be felt throughout the otherwise hollow and humid room. The stone walls and flat ceiling, has been standing since forever. So it has felt nonetheless. Weiss stretches his legs, adjusting the foot stool to his needs. For so long he has waited for the arising moment, yes, it had to be soon. His ears twitches as the sound of footsteps can be heard from the northern corridor. The double doors to the living room suddenly flies open. Without as much as a flicker, Weiss turns his attention towards the open hallway. A women appears to be standing in the doorway, her black robes almost touches the floor, yet stops at her angles. She seems distressed, no, it's more than that, she seems furious about something, or someone.

 

Gretel Strain grabs the dagger from the cloth. "It appears that the village has abandoned you dear." Small chuckles and silent laughs of excitement can be heard throughout the dining hall. Gulps and chokes can be heard from the helpless man kneeling in front of Gretel, his arms bound, and his mouth shut. Gretel immediately raises a hand, as the hall becomes dead silent. Gretel pats the mans shoulder, before moving the blade down slowly in front of his eyes, almost touching his nose, as it comes to a halt at his neck. Blood fills the cup almost instantly, as the remaining hits the floor, streaming down the stone steps towards the two long tables where eager Lessers jumps violently up and down in excitement. Gretel lets go of the corpse still leaning against her left hand, it falls to the side, leaving only the cup with blood in Gretel’s right hand.

 

Weiss, who is now staring at the furious women, slowly raises himself from the otherwise so comfortable armchair. He begins his slow walk across to the other side of the room, where a cup and a glass bottle is neatly placed on an old bookshelf. "You know, this bottle has been standing here for hundreds of years. They say, that it is the finest." Weiss says pulling the hood off the bottle. Blood slowly drips into the overly engraved metal cup, in Weiss's left hand. "Why were you not at the ceremony like the others? You know it is the duty of the three families to be present at such occasion" The woman suddenly exclaims as she steps into the room. The woman’s name is Gretel, Gretel Strain, she is said to be the toughest of the Vampires, but she is surely the toughest of the Strains. "As you know by now, I am not as fond of our recent discoveries as you may be. I have seen what the four descendants can do." Weiss says as his tone becomes cold, and serious. "For thousands and thousands of years, we have lived in silence, uninterrupted by the outside world, living in secret, covering up our needs as course of wild animals. I think it is time for change." Gretel says as she attempts to calm her voice. "That doesn't seem to stop Keeling from staying away, he must have known that the ceremony was tonight." Weiss folds his hand in an angry posture, as he looks down at the cup in his hand. Gretel who has calmed herself a bit, shakes her head, as she steps behind Weiss. "We must not dwell in the past, Keeling has his own endeavors, and has chosen to step away from our traditions." She lets her hand rest on Weiss shoulder, as she slowly turns to walk down the corridor from which she came, letting her hand drop to her side again. "Lets see what the descendants have in store for us."

[Potts244 412]

no

[xDK 1205]

no

 

Do you not like the story, or did you just write no because you are a sheep?

Edited October 18, 2015 by xDK

[MrSyth 637]

no

 

Do you not like the story, or did you just write no because you are a sheep?

He said no because it's common knowledge that vampires nor werewolves will ever be accepted onto the Lord of the Craft. In addition to that, there -is- something ever so slightly similiar to vampires, imp-somethings. I'll give you this serious response, you can expect a lot of plain "no"'s when posting topics regarding this.

[mitto 2312]

this is not lore it's a creative writing thread, it doesn't matter if it wont be lore approved. the OP is just doing a hypothetical, what if, if you would.

 

it's a well written piece, no more on lore. please

[Pinochet 356]

please no sir

[Mephistophelian 977]

Do I hear sheep baaing?



Guys, gals, this is a creative writing thread. What does that mean? It means this isn't someone looking to get lore accepted; they are just writing creatively.

[xDK 1205]

this is not lore it's a creative writing thread, it doesn't matter if it wont be lore approved. the OP is just doing a hypothetical, what if, if you would.

 

it's a well written piece, no more on lore. please

Do I hear sheep baaing?



Guys, gals, this is a creative writing thread. What does that mean? It means this isn't someone looking to get lore accepted; they are just writing creatively.

Thanks & Thanks for understanding the purpose of this subforum.

[Aislin 4354]

look hte fact of the mater is that vampires are Not ok ay for lotc because it is dangerous for children -1 please do not implement this creative writing story independent of lotc thanks.

[ACanadianCraft (Nate) 682]

Did you know
you can already play several creatures that are,
for all intents and purposes,
 a vampire!

You don't need a new race!
You just gotta git gud!

( Also, the story is kind of lame. Is that it?)

Edited October 18, 2015 by ACanadianCraft (Nate)

[Elad™ 560]

Moved to the Archive. It shall be sorted into the appropriate category shortly.