[Denied] application

[VeTeqz 0]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: VeTeqz

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I like the fact that pure slaying the other team without any tactic is forbidden

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): All rules are clear to me

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? a youtuber made a video about the server

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: RP is playing a character in video game and act like you are the character and act like the character would

What is metagaming?: metagaming is when you use OOC informations in the IC

What is powergaming?: powergaming is when someone does things which are not even possible

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Vetekz (spoken  like the old medieval name)

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: human

Character’s age: 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): My home, a little village, was all I ever wanted to explore but someday I wanted more. Then one day I escaped my house quietly at night and ran away. First I was lost but then I found this place called Vailor and thats where my adventure starts...

Personality Traits: lazy and often tired

Ambitions: make friends and explore

Strengths/Talents: really quick when it comes to moving of any kind

Weaknesses/Inabilities: not that strong + a litle  bit cheeky

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 1.85cm high and 70 Kilo weight

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here): http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/7305112/blade-dancer/ my skin is a light armored

[Keldrith 717]

Denied

Your application has been denied for the following reasons, if you have any questions at all I would be glad to answer them if you PM me on the forums! Please wait at least 24 hours before reapplying and be sure to make all revisions mentioned below before reapplying.

 

 

- Your roleplaying definition isn't incorrect but it's rather vague, please add some detail and perhaps make this more clear during revisions. 

 

- Your grammar needs some work! Please read over your application and fix all of the grammar mistakes~

 

- Your powergaming definition isn't incorrect but be more specific, you can use this link for both your roleplaying and powergaming definitions if you'd like, but do not just copy/paste them, that is plagiarism. http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Roleplaying?responseToken=8584ee76ee5ff0ec99965eb3a7564d56

 

- Your biography must be at least 2 paragraphs, preferably long-detailed paragraphs! 

 

-  You did mention Vailor in your biography but please add more server lore and detail to the entirety of the biography. You can read more about Vailor here! http://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/Vailor

 

- Please add more to your Personality Traits, and Ambitions. Be specific and detailed~

 

- Be more detailed on your strengths/talents. 

 

Be sure to ask questions if you have any, just send a PM~

 

 

[Keldrith 717]

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