[✔] [Accepted] [Pending]Note Mark

[[ToKi] Note 1]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: NoteKlix
How old are you?: 14
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No cyberbullying and cyberbullies will be punished.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for a 100% Roleplay server..
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

What is roleplaying?: Pretending to be another charecter or be living another life usually in a game.
What is metagaming?: Breaking the 4th wall while role-playing or making different decisions with your charecter using information your charecter shouldn't know.
What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Dictating what happens to another charector without the owner of that charectors permission.

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Note Mark
Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male
Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)Elf
Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 24
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) 
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Born in Haelun'or  Note lived with his two parents Carolina Lost (High Elf) and Malguf Mark (Dark Elf). His family was despised and looked down upon by high elves for being impure which made it much harder for the family to buy and use goods and services. This lead them to live a simple life, homeschooling Note and living in a small cottage. Note's parents didn't care about these things though. They treated Note like any other boy and put him first. Note was never hungry even though sometimes his parents were, Note was always taken well care of and the family was one of love. When Note was 10 a tall high elf came to the door with some others and they dragged Note's parents away. Note was forced to watch because one of the tall high elves held Note back. Note was locked into his room by the man and cried himself to sleep. When he woke up he could smell a delicious aroma, and was confused because his door was wide open. The elf that had locked him up was in his kitchen going through his food and making a breakfast. The man beckoned Note to sit down so he did so. As Note asked what was going on the man hushed him and started telling a story.
 

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"My name is Hema Homa and I am a slightly impure elf. My family has slowly been genetically cleansed over the years and I was considered pure enough to not be executed. I do not agree with what the other high elves are doing but if I am to refuse their orders I will die. My orders yesterday were to capture you and bring you to the captitol, but I chose not to. I could not stand by and watch anymore young impure elves suffer." Note barged in and yelled: "WHY DIDN'T YOU SAVE MY PARENTS?!" Hema Homa continued. "If I were to have tried to save your parents I would have been killed. You would have been killed to. I am a guard on a mission not soldier. I can not have taken them down. Alas, this is what you must do Note. The remainder of the impure elves will remain lost and confused. They need someone to help them organize. I do not know if that is you but you must bring the impure elves back together so we can grow. Their are many like me that are in the high elf society but we will die off if something is not done. War may not be the answer, but rather uniting. Help bring our society back!"
Note did not understand everything Hema Homa was telling him, for Note was still young, but Note realized there were not many impure left. His parents had told him about that in the past but Note only ever thought he would need his parents. Note had to find other impures. "Flee to the forest!" Hema Homa said.  "Their may be other impures there"
So that night Note ran and ran and ran to the forest with his fathers cloak on to hide his yellow impure eyes.

 

 

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10 Years later after barely surviving the constant Amber Wolf attacks and trying to telling the occasional impure elf directions Note woke up one night to see the a short crooked cloaked creature. Note followed it without saying a word.He followed and followed and followed for hours. But the cloaked figure stopped by a pit. Note ran up behind the figure and tried to tackle it, but the figure dodged to the side and Note fell into a pit full of skeletons. When he looked up the women was gone. One of the skeletons clothes were completely intact and it was holding on a bag. Note got curios and walked up to it. As he reached down for the bag he stopped in his tracks. His arm had touched the skeletons clothing. it was the most comfortable thing he had ever felt so he stripped the skeleton and picked up the bag. Inside of the bag was an odd purple crown. Note decided to put the crown and the clothes on- after washing them in a nearby stream. When he saw his reflection he realized he looked pretty cool. he would just wear these clothes instead- why the hell not? Then Note realized the reason he found all this was just because he was following some completely innocent person that was probably just an old wanderer and he felt bad.

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Note pondered his next move for months, with not one amber wolf attack, until he came up with a conclusion. Note would search for other impure elves and become friends with them. Create alliances, and become somewhat of a leader. Maybe get a Queen to.

 

Note realized. He was meant to be a King. But every king needs a queen. thus began his quest,
Note would find impure elves and find a queen.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) This character has sarcastic humor, is looking for a queen, is unique, and nibbles on his fingernails. He likes to have fun. He is chill and very blank to new people. He doesn't like tall dwarves. He also dislikes archers. His hatred for high elves comes from the deepest darkest most turmoiled place in his heart.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Note wants to be a King, a husband, a just ruler, a friend, an ally, and a warrior.
Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Note is stealthy, powerful, focused, driven, and is highly skilled in axe combat.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) This characters weakness is bright, bright, light. It negates his magic.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)
6' 4"
Brown Hair
Black Hood
Black Bandana
Pale Blue Skin
Assassin Like Black Clothing
Yellow Eyes
yellow eyes are considered impure
Black Cape With Intricate Design
Purple Glass-Like Crown.
heavy Chain/Steel Armour.
Made this myself:
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Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)
http://imgur.com/bwmaByZ
CHANGES MADE WITHIN 24 HOURS :)

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

 

 

Pending. . .

 

-Your character seems to have some form of divine appointment for things, having nearly everything be perfect for him to go into situations supernaturally, along with supernatural happenings and changes in his life, body, a daemon visit, accompanied with nonexistent writings and books affirming such. 

 

-While we're ok with characters having large ambitions, and goals, along with some happenings int heir life to affirm them, I am unable to accept an application (though while written well) that involves the aforementioned subjects. Please remove all supernatural, magical, and prophetic elements from your application.

 

-Your minecraft skin is not suitable for the setting of Lord of The Craft, with the unfitting clothing, and yellow eyes.

 

-You have 24 hours to make the needed changes. Failure to do so within 24 hours will result in being denied.

 

-Please send me a PM once you've made the needed changes, or if you have any questions.

 

Accepted.

 

-Please wait patiently for a GM to implement you.

[Quavinir_Twiceborn 1050]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Your application will be Implemented by a GM shortly.

[Wrynn 1349]

Player Whitelisted.