Goldrims Improved Applicaton.

[Goldrim 1422]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Goldrim

-How old are you?: 17

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT +1 / Austria

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes i do.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm a normal guy, with a great passion for Gaming and Flying, when i'm not busy studying i spend my time on the computer playing Minecraft.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: More then 15 hours a week.

-How long have you played minecraft?: Since Alpha, my apologies for not knowing the exact date.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I have been role-playing already for 4 Years on World of Warcraft (Argent Dawn EU), and have been role-playing on a few Minecraft servers.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Great, after checking out the trailer im psyched.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I don't remember the names of the specific servers, but i left them for a reason that some people abused their power.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes and yes.

-Name the 4 races on this server.: Humans, Dwarves, Elves and Orcs.

-How did you hear about us?: I was once searching on the forums and i stumbled on your thread. You could pretty much see from the start how good the server because of the website, since there has been put alot of effort into it.

-Did you vote?: Yes, three times.

-What was your favourite Law?: "Unlawful murder is a punishable offense"

-What was your least favourite Law?: None, they are all fine by me.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Goldrim

In-Character:

-Character Name: Goldrim

-What is your Race?: Dwarf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Goldrim

-Biography: Goldrim lived in small town, raised by his Father who was famous for being the Champion in arm wrestling. Goldrim pretty much lived the usual Dwarven life, aside seeing things that other don't see. A shadowy figure staring him right in the eyes, with no emotion to be seen. One day he decides to move out and start doing what he loves, adventuring.

But his father didn't let him go without giving him the Hammer that has been passed on by generation to generation. The Dawnbreaker.

-Character Age: 31

-Character Appearance: Male Caucasian with Brown hair and Brown eyes. Leather Gear with Chainmail over his Tunic, and with the Dawn Breaker on his back.

-Character Personality: Adventurous, intelligent and Hot headed.

-Your ambitions: Drinking Ale, Fighting and Seeking the thrill of life.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes he can.

-Can your character mine?: Never held a mining pick in his hand, but he has Dwarven blood, so he probably knows his ways with it.

-Are you a capable builder? If i had to rate myself on a scale of 1 to 10, i would go for a 7.5.

-Can you wield a sword?: He can use one but he's not great at it.

-Enjoy Farming?: I don't really mind.

-Does your character have any special skills?:] The Dawnbreaker. (His Hammer)

-A screenshot of your skin: http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/51/goldrimsskin.jpg/

-Other Information: Hope this was enough to convince you guys, really looking forward to meeting you all.

[Whitebeard 126]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/