[✗] [Pending] lpu2fan's whitelist application

[lpu2fan 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: lpu2fan

What timezone are you in?: Pacific timezone.

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the online content on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree most with the limited arson rule. Builds are dedicated efforts, they should only be tampered with under the right circumstances.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nope!

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Asked some people on MassiveCraft for a better roleplay server.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): Nope!

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yep!

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is having a character and playing it with other characters, assuming their mind and actions like your own.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is using information found outside your character, and having your inside character use it (or telling others so that they could).

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Powergaming is going past your character’s reasonable abilities.

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?): Lucien Dolabella

Character’s sex: (male or female?): Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.): Heartlander

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!): 22

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore):

Lucien Dolabella was born to a quaint household upon the Isles of Sutica. Under the graceful reign of Trade Princess Lilyana, Lucien enjoyed a conflict free childhood where he honed his natural abilities in the peaceful trade-state. His father was a master stonemason, capable of large projects. Soon into his childhood, his father began working on quality construction commissioned by rich nobles, enriching the young Lucien’s life. He was able to take lessons in petty swordplay, taking chance trips outside of the Isles to explore the world around them.

 

Lucien became quickly infatuated by the world surrounding their meager isles, quickly having a yearning desire to travel beyond and see what lay beyond the Cerulean Bay. In his tours across Axios, Lucien came across the Empire in its death throes, shattering into several human states that would be known as the various Kingdoms. Born amidst elves and other foreign races, Lucien had always wondered about is personal heritage: it was unknown. Infatuated and frustrated at the same time, Lucien has set out from the Isles of Sutica to find a worthy kingdom to fight for and make his name in a new and bold world.

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?): Lucien is an erratic young man, always seeking an out for his turbulent energy. He hates being kept in the same place, always taking a degree of wanderlust with him. He also enjoys redberry pie.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?): Lucien wants to be a hero of old. He likens himself to an adventurer, breaching out of the nurturing land of Sutica to explore the uncharted and dangerous. He sees the human Kingdoms as a way to exploit this desire.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?): Lucien is skilled at navigating the wilderness, having attained practice throughout his journeys in Axios. He is just beginning swordplay, though he takes a serious liking to it.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?): Lucien lacks empathy for the needs and desires of others. He is focused on his own personal dreams and ambitions, shuttering out anything else. In this, he is vain and unconcerned.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?): Lucien is 5’11 with brown hair and green eyes, having a grey underset of clothing with a green vest on top tied down with a belt. He looks like a simple man.

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.): https://gyazo.com/65b8254dbd8293f7e46812abe170457b

 

[Vaynth 3005]

Do not fret! This simply means your application is good, but just needs a few minor tweaks to make it better. Please make the following adjustments below in under 24 hours or face denial. No need to make another post, just hit the ‘edit’ button on the bottom! Once you have made the following adjustments be sure to let me know by messaging me via forums. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.
 

• Please describe your power-emoting definition in a bit more detail. Have a look at out own definition for a good example, just remember to put it into your own words.
  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting
   
• Your biography is looking great so far in regards to lore references, but it's not quite there yet in when it comes to length. We look for two long paragraphs.  Expand on it a bit. Please include more important events in your characters life which have molded them to be who they are today. (For this you will need the Wiki!)  Why do they have the personality traits, strengths and weaknesses you say they have? For instance if a characters weakness was they were afraid of spiders it may be because of a traumatic experience with spiders at a young age.

[Vaynth 3005]

Your application has been unfortunately  denied, due to you not making any of the necessary adjustments within the 24 hours period since it was placed on pending. You may re-apply 12 hours from now. If you do so before then, it will result in an automatic denial. Feel free to message me if you have require any sort of assistance involving your application or the server in general. Remember to put the points for your original pending into consideration still when re-applying.

[Vaynth 3005]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.