Linettes Lament

[Arhbi 181]

 

Linettes Lament

 

 

She was the dancing bear of Curon

Linette was a fool for sure

And upon her nations fall

This dancing bear would dance no more

 

Married a Duke, a respectable man

Ruined his house with her own two hands

She liked to gloat and banter a lot

And with her tongue she lost her lands

 

Now she weeps for what she lost

Linette was a fool for sure

Now she whines for a shred of mercy

This dancing bear would dance no more

 

 

Credit to Sir Carlovac for the name.

 

 

[sophiaa 778]

Leila Rubens claps.

[Chorale__ 2147]

Véres Draskovits raises a brow at this, "Intriguing, truly." he acknowledged, rolling his shoulders and casting the poem into the wastepaper basket that sat next to his bed.

[AGP 3169]

"Distasteful. The rhyme scheme is terrible," says Constantine.

[devvy 1348]

14 minutes ago, AGiantPie said:

"Distasteful. The rhyme scheme is terrible," says Constantine.

Aloisia agreed, the words struggling to flow in her head!

[Legoboy7984 3155]

"Hrm, think I have a way of perfecting this one, and I think I should honestly." Arnaud would smile as he'd began to write

[Arhbi 181]

5 hours ago, AGiantPie said:

"Distasteful. The rhyme scheme is terrible," says Constantine.

 

“A terrible poem for a terrible person.”

[Sheczar 378]

Upon reading the poem, Edward Suffolk would distastefully roll his eyes and would talk to his own magnificent inner person, "No sword of Curon shed such blood, compared to the bloody eyes this poem left behind! Oh wait did you just made a better rhyme? Oh Edward how proud I am to be you!”

[Creamy 252]

The hooded mistress let out a cheerful giggle, as her eyes traced the words with interest, her fingers followed the words on the parchment as she spoke aloud the poem, her face turned a sour glare as the woman concluded the speech, the note within her hands became a crumpled mess of splotched ink, with the flick of the woman's hand the once beautiful parchment would send it into the brightly shining campfire."How easily a castle turns into ruins by just  allowing a woman to speak her mind, how long the bear suffered endless torment with no proper care, how it begged to be slaughtered to end its pain, only to collapse from the pressure, the woman who was filled with such pride allowed herself to become so blind, hath Iblees touched this woman? or did she do such things with her own consent, for her dancing bear now turned beast, seeks revenge and redemption, may her hands forever stain red with the blood of her own wrongdoing, may the void show no mercy to this woman." moments passed as she remained  quiet in the darkness, until her body seemed to shiver at the cold breeze, once satisfied with what she had proclaimed to the greedy flames of the light, she would saddle her horse beginning to journey towards Renatus-Marna to seek the maestro. "Foolishness and greed is a mans beast, yet a woman who fell for these attributes still plays prey,  has she shown us the true colours of her skin?, or is there more beneath her pale sickly skin, for she is no more a heretic than the common bar wench, for her dancing bear still crying forevermore, as the music that once soothed his ears now only brings on misery, how a woman who acted like such a beast can still play coy without remorse, may the men who still respect her see the succubus in its true form, and may Iblees devour this soul for his own, for he hath finally found his queen, may she reside with him in the void for eternity." the woman chanted as she rode upon the cantering horse, through the dimly lit roads allowing for it to echo the eerie forest grounds, only to finish with the sounds of pounding hooves on muddy path roads. 

 

Spoiler

 

 

[Evangelli 83]

Gussie blinks at the words, she seems to find the words themselves funny but thinks that there author should have spent more time on the rhymes.

[osumanduas 1442]

Moved to The Great Library. It shall be sorted into the appropriate category shortly.

 

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