Order Of The Clerics (Recruiting)

[Gamil Irongut 4]

1.) Mc and Rp Name: spychicken956, Zi-Zi

2.) You Arms of Protection and you skill? [[Weapon and Skill level]]

Zi-Zi uses different weapons but usually a battle hammer sometimes a axe or sword but mostly war hammer.

3.) Do you swear to use your Arms to protect the people of the Order,the Innocent and the Patrons of the faiths?: Aye!

4.) Any Miltiary like past?: None

5.) Reasoning for joining

I wish to add fun and interesting RP to the guild and server as a whole and want to help the innocents and abused (rp wise) of the server.

[ΚΨΙΞ 710]

1. MC & RP Name: Pheonixpro1 & Azemar Gryffard

2. You Arms of Protection and you skill? [[Weapon and Skill level]] Azemar is great with a blade and likes to use two handed weapons that pack more of a punch but take a slow time to swing. Weapons like Warhammers, Maces and Battleaxes. He wears a piece of leather below his armour which is covered by mail, he wears a steel plate shoulder guard, neck guard, and male from head to toe, reference -

3. Do you swear to) use your Arms to protect the people of the Order, the Innocent and the Patrons of the faiths?: I swear to purge all evil in the name of Aeriel.

4. Any Miltiary like past?: Since this app is OOCly i'm going to have to say assume your asking me in particular and not my character. When I first joined the server I worked as a Warden for 4 months before the downfall of the Wardens. Then I worked as a Knight and got fired from being with the Purge. That character died and I made an Orc character whom was in the Krughai, which has now climbed to the rank of Nob and has been offered BigBoss but he turned it down. My other character Cailean is also a bandit who has had the most Military like experience out of all my characters. Azemar's past was only as a Mercenary who would take money from villages and defend them from attacks.

5. Reasoning for joining Azemar wishes to serve a purpose and he isn't gaining good pay from his current job to earn a House, he is trying to join a guild so he may earn free housing, possibly pay and purpose.

[Fengric 68]

1.) Mc and Rp Name: Mc name: seannie22/Rp name: Altain Crowley

2.) You Arms of Protection and you skill? [[Weapon and Skill level]]: Altain uses a longbow in which he isn't fully trained in yet and still misses the target, he also uses a one handed sword that could be swung with two hands for a better momentum.

3.) Do you swear to use your Arms to protect the people of the Order,the Innocent and the Patrons of the faiths?: I swear to use my Arms to protect the people of the Order, the Innocent and the Patrons of the Faiths.

4.)Any Military like past?: Never was in a military but he did Bounty hunts on bandits in the past.

5.) Reasoning for joining: Altain wishes to protect Innocent people from dangerous hazard.

DENIED

If you wish, you can revise or completely re-do your application.

As for a few suggestions, please expand upon all of your answers except for the very straight forward ones.

To be specific, put more into about the bandit raids. Explain in WHY Altain wants to protect people as well.

Looking forward to your next Application! (If there will be one)

- Fengric

[Fengric 68]

1.) Mc and Rp Name: spychicken956, Zi-Zi

2.) You Arms of Protection and you skill? [[Weapon and Skill level]]

Zi-Zi uses different weapons but usually a battle hammer sometimes a axe or sword but mostly war hammer.

3.) Do you swear to use your Arms to protect the people of the Order,the Innocent and the Patrons of the faiths?: Aye!

4.) Any Miltiary like past?: None

5.) Reasoning for joining

I wish to add fun and interesting RP to the guild and server as a whole and want to help the innocents and abused (rp wise) of the server.

DENIED

All I can see here is that you need to explain more on not just OOC why you wish to join, but also why Zi-Zi himself wants to be part of the Order. (Also put spaces in between your questions)

- Fengric

[Braxis 813]

1. MC & RP Name: Pheonixpro1 & Azemar Gryffard

2. You Arms of Protection and you skill? [[Weapon and Skill level]] Azemar is great with a blade and likes to use two handed weapons that pack more of a punch but take a slow time to swing. Weapons like Warhammers, Maces and Battleaxes. He wears a piece of leather below his armour which is covered by mail, he wears a steel plate shoulder guard, neck guard, and male from head to toe, reference -

3. Do you swear to) use your Arms to protect the people of the Order, the Innocent and the Patrons of the faiths?: I swear to purge all evil in the name of Aeriel.

4. Any Miltiary like past?: Since this app is OOCly i'm going to have to say assume your asking me in particular and not my character. When I first joined the server I worked as a Warden for 4 months before the downfall of the Wardens. Then I worked as a Knight and got fired from being with the Purge. That character died and I made an Orc character whom was in the Krughai, which has now climbed to the rank of Nob and has been offered BigBoss but he turned it down. My other character Cailean is also a bandit who has had the most Military like experience out of all my characters. Azemar's past was only as a Mercenary who would take money from villages and defend them from attacks.

5. Reasoning for joining Azemar wishes to serve a purpose and he isn't gaining good pay from his current job to earn a House, he is trying to join a guild so he may earn free housing, possibly pay and purpose.

* A Bird drops a letter by you saying the follow if you choose to read*

"You have been accepted into the Clerical order, Seek the Clerical prophet [[vaunce]] or Paladin Fengric [[boxofDog][ To get your bunk and trails done. and ye shall be showed the paladins path"

[Gamil Irongut 4]

1.) Mc and Rp Name: spychicken956, Zi-Zi

2.) You Arms of Protection and you skill? [[Weapon and Skill level]]

Zi-Zi uses different weapons but usually a battle hammer sometimes a axe or sword but mostly war hammer.

3.) Do you swear to use your Arms to protect the people of the Order,the Innocent and the Patrons of the faiths?: Aye!

4.) Any Miltiary like past?: None

5.) Reasoning for joining

Zi-Zi has encountered a lot of strife and pain in her life her father was a miner but also very abusive he beat Zi-Zi and her sister daily it got to the point where he accidentally killed Zi-Zi's sister at that point she decided to leave home. As she traveled around Asulon going town to town she saw more atrocities cities and towns attacked by enemies children beaten and left to die on the streets gangs stealing and killing for pleasure and many other things. She accepted this as reality and let it not bother her but deep in her heart she knew it was wrong and that she had to do something to stop it. Recently she witnessed a child being beaten by its father after intervening Zi-Zi had an epiphany she realized she could do things to help and that she must. She heard tell of a clerical order and knew in her heart she must try to join.

[Fengric 68]

1.) Mc and Rp Name: spychicken956, Zi-Zi

2.) You Arms of Protection and you skill? [[Weapon and Skill level]]

Zi-Zi uses different weapons but usually a battle hammer sometimes a axe or sword but mostly war hammer.

3.) Do you swear to use your Arms to protect the people of the Order,the Innocent and the Patrons of the faiths?: Aye!

4.) Any Miltiary like past?: None

5.) Reasoning for joining

Zi-Zi has encountered a lot of strife and pain in her life her father was a miner but also very abusive he beat Zi-Zi and her sister daily it got to the point where he accidentally killed Zi-Zi's sister at that point she decided to leave home. As she traveled around Asulon going town to town she saw more atrocities cities and towns attacked by enemies children beaten and left to die on the streets gangs stealing and killing for pleasure and many other things. She accepted this as reality and let it not bother her but deep in her heart she knew it was wrong and that she had to do something to stop it. Recently she witnessed a child being beaten by its father after intervening Zi-Zi had an epiphany she realized she could do things to help and that she must. She heard tell of a clerical order and knew in her heart she must try to join.

ACCEPTED

Awesome, that'll do fine.

I like your determination, and willingness to adjust. Read the letter sent in the last app review by Jroy, and follow the instructions.

[Fengric 68]

*Rolls out his white parchment, writing specifically to the War Cleric, and writes*

"War Cleric -

I write this letter to you, and you only, containing information of importance to me.

In my travels I discovered an order called The White Rose, and I shall withhold the information as such on how I found out about them unless you truly wish to know. Much like the House Of Flay, they are a group of people that act like savages and kill those who offend them merely once.

I suggest with my dearest encouragement that we find a way to rid them from Asulon, as the House Of Flay was.

I understand that calling out war on something would not bode well, but my reasoning is both personal and concerning to the life of many.

- Pala. Fengric"

*whistles to his armored Cooper's Hawk and rolled up his parchment, putting a red seal with an Angelic Falcon engraved on it around the letter, giving it to the hawk and sending it off to the War Cleric.*

[Braxis 813]

*Rolls out his white parchment, writing specifically to the War Cleric, and writes*

"War Cleric -

I write this letter to you, and you only, containing information of importance to me.

In my travels I discovered an order called The White Rose, and I shall withhold the information as such on how I found out about them unless you truly wish to know. Much like the House Of Flay, they are a group of people that act like savages and kill those who offend them merely once.

I suggest with my dearest encouragement that we find a way to rid them from Asulon, as the House Of Flay was.

I understand that calling out war on something would not bode well, but my reasoning is both personal and concerning to the life of many.

- Pala. Fengric"

*whistles to his armored Cooper's Hawk and rolled up his parchment, putting a red seal with an Angelic Falcon engraved on it around the letter, giving it to the hawk and sending it off to the War Cleric.*

The Clerical Prophet sits at the Alter in the fort looking at the letter sighing as he writes back to the Paladin

"You desire to spread good is greatly appericeated young Paladin. But I must infrom ye we are on good terms with Oren, and several Clerics are part of the Clergy with High Pontiff Pius' Pact with us. We follow the Same Patrons and the same Creator, just differnt names. We have aided eachother when needed, and the Roses are old friends of mine who have saved my life and several others many times before, it is true they have a great hatred for the child of Malin, but that is currently due to the towns they have plundered and raided. And they are a Oren knightly Chapter, we shall not get ourselfs into Poltics, and nation affairs we are a order of Balance, not war"

The Seal of the Clerical Prophet is seen below. He rolls the scroll binding it shut then proceeding to walk outside where he attaches the letter to his Hawk sending it off to find Paladin Fengric.

[Fengric 68]

The Clerical Prophet sits at the Alter in the fort looking at the letter sighing as he writes back to the Paladin

"You desire to spread good is greatly appericeated young Paladin. But I must infrom ye we are on good terms with Oren, and several Clerics are part of the Clergy with High Pontiff Pius' Pact with us. We follow the Same Patrons and the same Creator, just differnt names. We have aided eachother when needed, and the Roses are old friends of mine who have saved my life and several others many times before, it is true they have a great hatred for the child of Malin, but that is currently due to the towns they have plundered and raided. And they are a Oren knightly Chapter, we shall not get ourselfs into Poltics, and nation affairs we are a order of Balance, not war"

The Seal of the Clerical Prophet is seen below. He rolls the scroll binding it shut then proceeding to walk outside where he attaches the letter to his Hawk sending it off to find Paladin Fengric.

*reads the letter, savoring every word, and calls his hawk to ready for his reply*

"War Cleric-

I understand.

I am aware of the Orders relations with Oren, and the intentions of our Order itself. Thought I cannot find myself to not be readily worried for what is to come from them.

I'd rather not get myself involved in politics either, but it is in my best interest to stay any possible problematic situations.

I must thank you for your insight, but I don't think any further knowledge could drown out my

concerns.

- Pala. Fengric"

*repeats the process, sending off his Cooper's Hawk*

[Gamil Irongut 4]

*writes a note out to Fengric* I have almost finished me trials and will send yeh a nuta bird when oim finished. ((cant get on right now due to computer issues))

[Arkelos 1027]

Kyral sits in her study, grumbling as she realizes shes without a teacher now, she, rather than giving up, decides to write a note to Braxis, The Clerical Prophet.

"Clerical Prophet,

I have recently found myself in a snag with my clerical training, and am without a teacher now. As such, I was looking to find a new teacher, preferably you. Areon has made it known he can not teach me anymore, and all I know is my Silver Aura. If you can find it in your busy schedule to assist me in my teachings, I would be most grateful.

Please send a bird soon, I shall be waiting patiently.

Imperial Queen Kyral, of House Horen Hightower"

[Lafthi Sylvari 12]

1)MC Name & RP Name: MC: Archoly RP: Lafthi Sylvari

2) Chosen Patron: Aeriel

3) Reason For Joining (do not have the reason be to become Ascended):

In Aegis, Lafthi started out as an ambassador for Malinor, and for a time he was content. For the first time his life had purpose. He was able to not only help Malinor, but help bring peace to Aegis. However, there always came a point where Lafthi could not bring peace to Malinor. Whether that was because of forces beyond his control, such as the war-prone Orcs, or because of his own failings, there would be times when Lafthi could not bring peace to Malinor. This would rack his conscience with extreme guilt, as the blood was spilled in the wars was because of him. It was during one of these times in his life that Lafthi was approached by the Ascended. After being informed by the Sages that in his blood flowed the blood of the Aenguls, he redevoted his life to Aeriel. After many months of studying deep into the night in the hidden catacombs of Haven, training with his fellow initiates in the practice yard and countless hours in the chapel forging a special connection with Aeriel, Lafthi once again knew happiness in his life. Once he was a fully trained Ascended he walked Aegis, healing the sick, protecting the defenseless and spreading the light of Aeriel into the darkness that Iblees had attempted to cast. However, Iblees was winning. Cities were falling to the undead every day. No matter how hard the Ascended tried to work, they could not stop the onslaught that was the undead. However, everyone knows where the story goes from here. Eventually the races fled Aegis to the new land of Asulon. With their departure from Aegis, so fled the Ascended power's that Lafthi had come to depend on. No longer could he conjure the purifying flames or the healing light that he had used in Aeriel's name. However, Aeriel had helped Lafthi. Rather than simply sink into depression again he continued to spread Aeriel's light without his powers. Even though he could no longer work great acts in her name, such as purifying the soul with fire like he had used to; instead he now worked small acts in her name. He gave food to the hungry, clothed the naked, and cared to the dying. However, now that Lafthi has heard of The Clerics, he wishes to join their ranks so that he might once again follow the path of Aeriel like he once did in Aegis.

4)Race: High Elf

5)Flaws in Your Character: On the physical side Lafthi is a slightly older High Elf. This means that he is on the weaker side, physically, as compared to other races. However, it is mentally that Lafthi has his bigger weaknesses. After spending many years in a public office, Lafthi has come to be a bit paranoid. While this had actually helped him to a limited extent in some cases, it tends to put quite the strain on relationships, especially when first starting out. Rather than getting to know the person oftentimes Lafthi is searching for their motivation and how they could hurt him.

6) How long have you been on the server: I joined during the summer of 2011, but did take a few months off this year. Overall, I have been actively playing for a bit more than a year.

Scenario Questions-Answer how you would react to each situation.

7) You notice an Apprentice Shade harassing a lowly citizen. [shades Are Evil Mages]

Lafthi looks down an alleyway of Kal’Alras and notices what appears to be to figures up against a wall. After a brief examination Lafthi notices that one appears to be an apprentice shade that had cornered a young dwarven maid of Alras. The thought occurs to Lafthi that no master shade would send his apprentice on an actual “hit” of a target so it is more than likely that the overconfident apprentice had wanted to test his new powers, as well as earn some coin for a good time. Lafthi pulls out a small bag of coin and calls to the Shade, “It seems like you are having a bit of fun there, but perhaps taking this will save you some time?” It seems Lafthi’s assumptions were correct about the shade as he rushed by Lafthi, taking the coin and leaving the poor dwarf huddled in the corner. Lafthi lets the shade leave and addresses the young girl still huddled in the corner, “Now then miss are you alright?”

8) You see a small child shivering in the snow.

Lafthi is walking his way around the countryside surrounding Holm when he hears a rustle in the bushes. The fading light of the setting sun doesn’t allow Lafthi to see what kind of game made the noise, but food is food so Lafthi unslings his bow and knocks an arrow. The small creature this time crawls out of the bushes, taking it to be a wounded artic cat or small bear, Lafthi aims and nearly releases the arrow before hearing a small cry from the small shape. Upon further inspection the “shape” turns out to be a young northerner, no more than five or six that had lost his parents on their move to Holm. Taking off his wolfskin coat and blanket from his pack he covers the boy. After starting a fire and building a small shelter in the snow for the night Lafthi is able to talk to the boy and discover where his parents were heading. Learning it is not far he makes plans to set off for the boy’s parents’ new farm in the morning.

9) You are walking down the road when a bandit stops you and threatens to kill you if you don't give him all your money and valuables.

“Ah, but of course, let me simply open my pack.” Lafthi opens his pack to reveal that he is carrying three loaves of bread, a couple of apples, and a book about Aeriel, much to the thief’s dismay. As Lafthi hands over the book he comments “Perhaps you might learn a thing or two from that book? Might I help you?” The thief gives Lafthi a look of disgust and shoves his to the ground. Pushing himself up Lafthi sees that the thief is gone. “Perhaps he might learn from that book… or at least the person he sells it to…”

10) As you walk through the local market place a person begins to yell that Aeriel and the other patrons are weak and cruel and claims that joining Iblees is the only way to survive.

*Lafthi takes notice of the man and walks up to listen for some time. There is quite the crowd gathered around the man preaching, with some of them even shaking their heads in agreement.* The man continues, “Aeriel is weak, the God she serves is weak. You saw how the undead raided and pillaged and drove us from our homes in Aegis. We could do naught but run! So what did we do in the end? We fled! Fled to Asulon! What will we do when Iblees finds his way here? Where shall we run to then? We have already fled as far as we can! Iblees is your only hope! Fall to your knees and pray for mercy, for by resisting you will have none!”

*Lafthi is alarmed to see some, perhaps even a majority of the crowd fall to their knees while the man offers some prayer to Iblees. Alarmed Lafthi speaks up.*

“Friends! Think about what you are doing! You are not worshipping Iblees’ because out of love, like we did with Aeriel, or any of the other patrons. No, you are worshipping out of fear! And what is this fear worship doing? You are only adding to Iblees’ power! By worshipping him you are only giving more power to the one you fear most! So friends, sink not into despair! Instead hope! Hope for the future!! Hope for your children! Hope for a new life free of Iblees and his ilk! And pray to the patrons that can give you that. Not Iblees and his fear but Aeriel and her love. A patroness worthy of your worship!”

11) A person walks up and asks you, "Why does God allow suffering to continue?"

“Ah, the inevitable question. There are several theories out there each with their own merits. I am personally of the opinion that God allows suffering so that we may show who we truly are. It is easy to be a good person when all is going well. In fact, you may even want to. However, is it just as easy to when you are suffering? Nay, any true suffering inevitably damages our spirits, for a time or forever. However, we must try to stay the straight and narrow even when this is the case. However, once again, that is only my opinion.”

[Fengric 68]

1)MC Name & RP Name: MC: Archoly RP: Lafthi Sylvari

2) Chosen Patron: Aeriel

3) Reason For Joining (do not have the reason be to become Ascended):

In Aegis, Lafthi started out as an ambassador for Malinor, and for a time he was content. For the first time his life had purpose. He was able to not only help Malinor, but help bring peace to Aegis. However, there always came a point where Lafthi could not bring peace to Malinor. Whether that was because of forces beyond his control, such as the war-prone Orcs, or because of his own failings, there would be times when Lafthi could not bring peace to Malinor. This would rack his conscience with extreme guilt, as the blood was spilled in the wars was because of him. It was during one of these times in his life that Lafthi was approached by the Ascended. After being informed by the Sages that in his blood flowed the blood of the Aenguls, he redevoted his life to Aeriel. After many months of studying deep into the night in the hidden catacombs of Haven, training with his fellow initiates in the practice yard and countless hours in the chapel forging a special connection with Aeriel, Lafthi once again knew happiness in his life. Once he was a fully trained Ascended he walked Aegis, healing the sick, protecting the defenseless and spreading the light of Aeriel into the darkness that Iblees had attempted to cast. However, Iblees was winning. Cities were falling to the undead every day. No matter how hard the Ascended tried to work, they could not stop the onslaught that was the undead. However, everyone knows where the story goes from here. Eventually the races fled Aegis to the new land of Asulon. With their departure from Aegis, so fled the Ascended power's that Lafthi had come to depend on. No longer could he conjure the purifying flames or the healing light that he had used in Aeriel's name. However, Aeriel had helped Lafthi. Rather than simply sink into depression again he continued to spread Aeriel's light without his powers. Even though he could no longer work great acts in her name, such as purifying the soul with fire like he had used to; instead he now worked small acts in her name. He gave food to the hungry, clothed the naked, and cared to the dying. However, now that Lafthi has heard of The Clerics, he wishes to join their ranks so that he might once again follow the path of Aeriel like he once did in Aegis.

4)Race: High Elf

5)Flaws in Your Character: On the physical side Lafthi is a slightly older High Elf. This means that he is on the weaker side, physically, as compared to other races. However, it is mentally that Lafthi has his bigger weaknesses. After spending many years in a public office, Lafthi has come to be a bit paranoid. While this had actually helped him to a limited extent in some cases, it tends to put quite the strain on relationships, especially when first starting out. Rather than getting to know the person oftentimes Lafthi is searching for their motivation and how they could hurt him.

6) How long have you been on the server: I joined during the summer of 2011, but did take a few months off this year. Overall, I have been actively playing for a bit more than a year.

Scenario Questions-Answer how you would react to each situation.

7) You notice an Apprentice Shade harassing a lowly citizen. [shades Are Evil Mages]

Lafthi looks down an alleyway of Kal’Alras and notices what appears to be to figures up against a wall. After a brief examination Lafthi notices that one appears to be an apprentice shade that had cornered a young dwarven maid of Alras. The thought occurs to Lafthi that no master shade would send his apprentice on an actual “hit” of a target so it is more than likely that the overconfident apprentice had wanted to test his new powers, as well as earn some coin for a good time. Lafthi pulls out a small bag of coin and calls to the Shade, “It seems like you are having a bit of fun there, but perhaps taking this will save you some time?” It seems Lafthi’s assumptions were correct about the shade as he rushed by Lafthi, taking the coin and leaving the poor dwarf huddled in the corner. Lafthi lets the shade leave and addresses the young girl still huddled in the corner, “Now then miss are you alright?”

8) You see a small child shivering in the snow.

Lafthi is walking his way around the countryside surrounding Holm when he hears a rustle in the bushes. The fading light of the setting sun doesn’t allow Lafthi to see what kind of game made the noise, but food is food so Lafthi unslings his bow and knocks an arrow. The small creature this time crawls out of the bushes, taking it to be a wounded artic cat or small bear, Lafthi aims and nearly releases the arrow before hearing a small cry from the small shape. Upon further inspection the “shape” turns out to be a young northerner, no more than five or six that had lost his parents on their move to Holm. Taking off his wolfskin coat and blanket from his pack he covers the boy. After starting a fire and building a small shelter in the snow for the night Lafthi is able to talk to the boy and discover where his parents were heading. Learning it is not far he makes plans to set off for the boy’s parents’ new farm in the morning.

9) You are walking down the road when a bandit stops you and threatens to kill you if you don't give him all your money and valuables.

“Ah, but of course, let me simply open my pack.” Lafthi opens his pack to reveal that he is carrying three loaves of bread, a couple of apples, and a book about Aeriel, much to the thief’s dismay. As Lafthi hands over the book he comments “Perhaps you might learn a thing or two from that book? Might I help you?” The thief gives Lafthi a look of disgust and shoves his to the ground. Pushing himself up Lafthi sees that the thief is gone. “Perhaps he might learn from that book… or at least the person he sells it to…”

10) As you walk through the local market place a person begins to yell that Aeriel and the other patrons are weak and cruel and claims that joining Iblees is the only way to survive.

*Lafthi takes notice of the man and walks up to listen for some time. There is quite the crowd gathered around the man preaching, with some of them even shaking their heads in agreement.* The man continues, “Aeriel is weak, the God she serves is weak. You saw how the undead raided and pillaged and drove us from our homes in Aegis. We could do naught but run! So what did we do in the end? We fled! Fled to Asulon! What will we do when Iblees finds his way here? Where shall we run to then? We have already fled as far as we can! Iblees is your only hope! Fall to your knees and pray for mercy, for by resisting you will have none!”

*Lafthi is alarmed to see some, perhaps even a majority of the crowd fall to their knees while the man offers some prayer to Iblees. Alarmed Lafthi speaks up.*

“Friends! Think about what you are doing! You are not worshipping Iblees’ because out of love, like we did with Aeriel, or any of the other patrons. No, you are worshipping out of fear! And what is this fear worship doing? You are only adding to Iblees’ power! By worshipping him you are only giving more power to the one you fear most! So friends, sink not into despair! Instead hope! Hope for the future!! Hope for your children! Hope for a new life free of Iblees and his ilk! And pray to the patrons that can give you that. Not Iblees and his fear but Aeriel and her love. A patroness worthy of your worship!”

11) A person walks up and asks you, "Why does God allow suffering to continue?"

“Ah, the inevitable question. There are several theories out there each with their own merits. I am personally of the opinion that God allows suffering so that we may show who we truly are. It is easy to be a good person when all is going well. In fact, you may even want to. However, is it just as easy to when you are suffering? Nay, any true suffering inevitably damages our spirits, for a time or forever. However, we must try to stay the straight and narrow even when this is the case. However, once again, that is only my opinion.”

DENIED

This is a GOOD app, don't get me wrong, you did a wonderful job on the reason for joining. The only problem is the scenario questions.

There are a few problems, shades are not petty thieves. They go for blood, sacrifices, and call to Iblees himself for help. Also the bandit. A normal everyday bandit isn't gonna go away on some food, they want money and will kill a thousand people for it, doesn't matter how much it is (Unless it is like 1 Mina).

Other than that, just keep working on it, and choose a way it is more enticing to read.

Thanks!

- Fengric

[Salamandra 1133]

I recognize the question about shades? ^.^ I would kindly ask that you perhaps change the name to warlock, or something as simple as dark mage instead please, to avoid any misconceptions. Not all shades are evil!

:)