Sprintindwarf's App

[Miquill 188]

MC Username: sprintindwarf

Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread): I do not know the gladiator prefix nor found it, Karnath is my name

Character Skillset: Swords: 82 Lumberjack: 20 Mining: 52 Cooking: 2 Fishing: 9 Farming: 51 Excavation: 16 Archery: 3 Wrestling: 40 Axe Mastery: 0 Blacksmith: 0

Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender): A big Tigrasi brute standing tall and ripped with muscles. He wears armor fit for gladiator fights but not always suitable for war.

Kitten: He is small, with big green eyes.

Personality: He is one of the most loyal in the Empire. He will protect anyone even if it costs him his own life. He is very fun to be around.

Kitten Personality: He is quiet shy and doesn't talk to many people. Even the slightest tease could terrify him to death.

Please include a short bio of your character's life: Karnath was raised by his father because his mother died giving birth. He always showed persistence in his youth, but he was quiet small. He also didn't socialize very well, so he spent most of his time with his father exercising. He made some friends but he was still very shy and didn't want any other friends. His father died when he was 5 and he was raised by some of the villagers that knew his parents. He usually just laid in his bed thinking or running around his father's house. He stopped playing with his friends for a bit and pretended to play with his father. After about 5 months and he was nearing 6 years of age he began to play with his friends once again. He heard stories about gladiators from them, and many other things. He would always ask about the gladiators and they would tell him some, but it was never enough. He wanted to be one very badly that he begged for a sword for a month before he was finally given a full wooden blade. He would swing it around and pretend he was fighting in battles and playing. His laugh was beautiful when he rarely showed it. He got better with friends, but the sadness of his father dying kept him shy. He believes his father speaks to him sometimes, and knows that he will always be with his father, because his father gave him the amulet his mother once wore, and he himself wore after her passing, before he died and Karnath wears it everywhere.

Karnath made some more friends and begin to train with Ri'Shajiir, and his friend the kitten Majiir. Majiir and him liked to wrestle a lot too. Majiir was the only person besides his father who finally started to bring out the light in him and he became less and less shy. Then one day Karnath was trapped between a spider, a skeleton, and a magma cube, he thought his life was over until he was rescued by Shajiir. He was terrified for quiet a few days after the life changing experience, but eventually he began to play with Majiir again. Though, when he was without one of his friends he could be shy, but not near as bad as he used to be. Then one day Karnath met a tigrasi woman named Loka, who had some loss of her own. She had lossed a cub she brought in from a deadly illness. Karnath told her of his own losses, and she adopted him hoping to give him something better. Loka wasn't very rich though, in fact she was quiet poor, but Karnath had lived with worse and didn't really mind it. Karnath began to love her as he did his father, and his best friend Majiir.

On Karnath's 7th birthday and Majiir's 8th, they shared gifts with each other. What happened to be a coincidence was the gave each other the same gift, a golden nugget. But they both treasured it.

Character's ambitions: He wishes to become the strongest warrior in the land, and become well liked by those around him.

_---Situational Rp Questions---_[/ My questions are based on being older because a kitten wouldn't just walk around the Jungle freely and other stuff like that.

1.

As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?:

Karnath would tell the man he would help him, but he doesn't want to see him again. Karnath would lead him to the shores give him a small boat and set it off.

2.

As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak.

"Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!"

He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?:

Karnath would grab the dwarf by the neck. He then would spit in the dwarf's face saying " I think you better watch your mouth before anyone else gets hurt" then he would shove the dwarf backwards and take a mug of ale and walk out in disgust.

3.

One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response?

Karnath would shout at them " Why have you come here then! I cannot help you, if anything you'll just get me in trouble! " He'd then give them some food and say " Either eat as much as you can before you confess to the emperor, or run away and never return like a coward! " Then he would say goodbye and go back to his bed, but he wouldn't sleep, he would sit down thinking if he could have done things better.

Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred?

Yes I do, with all my heart.

Please include a screenshot or 3D render of your character's skin

http://s1248.photobucket.com/albums/hh485/jttgold/?action=view&current=GladiatorTigrassi.png

Kitten skin: http://s1248.photobucket.com/albums/hh485/jttgold/?action=view&current=KittenTigrasi.png

[Lykos 276]

Accepted...

Here is a drawing of a lightsaber-toothed tiger with derpy eyes.

[OlcanAchak 116]

There is a strong amount of powergaming in the situational, I think personally that this should be looked over again. Edit: I also noticed some non-true statements in there as well.

[Mystery 118]

I agree. There is a excessive amount power-gaming

[Miquill 188]

I'll edit it. I wasn't too happy after re-reading it today as well.

EDIT: The original bio has been edited and I will upload my kitten skin in a minute once the upload and download is done.

[Lykos 276]

Another app read read too quickly.

Doesnt look too bad at this time though...

[Mystery 118]

Honestly I didn't read the bio, I meant the Rp questions :/ Sorry should have been more clear :P

[Lykos 276]

Read through more carefully... Plus multiple accounts from other players regarding your powergaming while in rp... fix it all, and it you want to be a Kharajyr, you can't just come in and BOOM biggest one there.

-redone, denied. Get Xer to review it for you next.

[Lykos 276]

Gah, consider this under suspension, he can come along, will deal with this later

[Miquill 188]

Completely re did my bio.

[Lykos 276]

accepted... I see no problem, but my eyes have tricked me before.

[KarmaDelta 969]

Revoked:

Reason:

In-game you are not this character. You are playing a kitten which goes against this.

I recommend you leave and ask a GM to to redo your player card.

1/2 Need another member to complete the revoke.

[Miquill 188]

Yes I was this character, but I had a life changing experience.

EDIT: Also if you read towards the end of my bio, I start becoming more normal and less shy. Plus the experience I had makes me less shy.

[KarmaDelta 969]

We just started Kharajyr yesterday, and there has already been a something already life changing? All I see you do is cause trouble with somewhat bad rp.

But the way you word your bio is kind of wierd. Im sure the KAT will talk of this and whoever wants to add the other half of the revoke.

Im sure it will take some time, but I want you to know, bump up your RP. Dont try and force things. When you do, you end up making bad RP.

And from what you say now:

Yes I was this character, but I had a life changing experience.

EDIT: Also if you read towards the end of my bio, I start becoming more normal and less shy. Plus the experience I had makes me less shy.

You appear to love getting into fights. If you say "less shy" I am sure there would still be some shy left. Dont you think fighting and disregarding everyone just proves the point? Im sure others would have been alright with it, but your a young cub, that should barely know how to speak and fight, and end up making some people facepalm.

This will be talked about.

[Praetor 1550]

If the revoke on this Application is still in order, It has now become 2/2 revoked.

Reasons: Read KarmaDelta's post.