My Re Application

[Eleatic 1033]

Apology:

I give this to you out of the depths of my heart, I am so sorry for the things I did, I had never intended for the revokal to happen (( And if you are wondering I did not mean to lie, I had heard the orcs were on the island and I had decided to relay the information not knowing it was false )) I do hope the great people of this race can forgive me~

MC Username: borgtrek7

Rp Username (be sure to include the correct prefix, look up on info thread): Ja' Savari

Character Skillset: 100 Mining the rest . . . I shall consider later.

Appearance (age, SUBRACE, gender): Age: 30. Subrace: Patnera. Gender: Male.

Personality: A sly cunning man, quick to wit and slow to a sword.

Please include a short bio of your character's life:

Ja'Savari was raised by inventors, Ja'Loring And Ja'Narnas in his life the taught him all they could as he was maturing, Savari found it amazing all he learned and took a large interest in this trade and work. His parents always told him never to fight without a good reason and in his life he cherished his parents. .. Even in the end of their days, at the age of 20 the family of Savari died, he greived and greived until he could not take it, he was consoled by his best friend, (( Forgot his name, it was tthorn3 so sorry . . . )) and in time he realized he could live without them. . . and he began to feel happiness again. as him and Savari bought a home and became good friends, soon after like all things. . . He went into a coma. . . And now he awakens to see the world so different from now. . . And he is so happy of it~

Character's ambitions:

To become a royal inventor for the Titallani.

To become respected in the kingdom.

_---Situational Rp Questions---_

1.

As you travel through the Karakatuan jungle, you spot a human trespassing on your nation's lands. He approaches you, obviously distressed, and asks for any food, water, or shelter that you can provide, then tells you that he has been lost in the area for days without any proper supplies. How do you react?:

* Looks at the man oddly and Frowns

" Human come to oasis "

* Points to the oasis in the distance *

* The man shakes Savari's hand and smiles running to it *

* Walks off as the man takes his fill of water and gets himself some trout

2.

As you romp through the lands of the "apes", you come across a tavern. Inside this tavern, a Dwarf notices you and starts gawking at you, then begins to speak. "Oi! I gots a bowl of cream for you, Kitty! Ha! I'd bet you would make a nice throw rug, wouldn't ya, ya mangy furball?!"

He continues act generally as racist as possible. What do you do?:

* Smiles trying to ignore him *

* The dwarf continues *

* Screams at the Dwarf and hisses

" Listen you little *****!, do not say a word like that to me again or I will rip your eyes out with my damn dirty claws! "

* Smacks the Dwarf scratching him, he leaves in a rage.

* Sees the Dwarf gives him the middle finger as he leaves

* Hisses " Bad mistake. "

* Lunges at the Dwarf creating a large battle in the tavern

" Oh kitteh got rage eg~! "

* Hisess and swipes at the orc

* In the dwarf's drunkenness he fails to avoid the claw getting swiped in the neck

* Leaves the Dwarf on the floor and chuckles " He messed with the wrong cat~ "

3.

One of your fellow Kharajyr and a close friend of yours comes to your dwelling in the middle of the night and begins to pound on your door. After you let him in, he confesses to killing another Kharajyr over a slice of cake. What do you do in response?

* Looks at the man and sighs . . .

" . . . You know I will be killed if I kill you with me. . . "

* He looks at Savari pleedingly

" Come. . . I know a place "

* Takes him to the back entrance and attempts to hand him to the guards

" You are not my friend. . . You are scum. . "

* Throws him to the guards as the little theif squirms

" Thank you, for brining him in Ja'Savari. "

* Bows respectfully and walks off *

Do you swear to follow the Tlatlanni and uphold his law, and do you swear to hold Metztli and all of her actions as sacred?

Yes I do * Purrs *

Please include a screenshot or 3D render of your character's skin: I am so sorry to ask but I can not put it in as my computer is derping, can you look at the original app :)?

[Xerdun 117]

Not a bad attempt but please include more detail in the personality, appearance, bio and situational questions. Edit the information in and include an "[updated]" tag to the thread title when you're done. Nothing wrong with what you've already done (except some more punctuation may be good in the bio :P) it just needs filling out. Aim to at least double the length of what you've already done - there's no such thing as too much content. We'll look forward to having you back with us when your app is suitably filled out :)

[Princeton 396]

Moved to the Great Library. It shall be sorted into appropriate category shortly.