Strifeor's Alt Account Application, 2Nd Try.

[Strife 266]

Out-Of-Character

Main Minecraft Account Name:

StrifeOr

Alternate Minecraft Account Name:

Revenant_King

In your own words, define what the act of Roleplaying is:

Roleplaying is basically is taking on the role of a fictional character with other people taking on the role of a different character.

In your own Words, define what the act of Metagaming is:

Metagaming is using Out Of Character(OOC) and using it to your andvantage in character when the person you're roleplaying has no knowledge of the information.

In your own Words, define what the act of Powergaming is:

Powergaming is when you make your character do something they cannot do, ie a Halfling picking up a 10 ton boulder and throwing it an Orc

In-Character:

Character Name:

Neri_Elensar (Female character

What Race are you?:

Neri is an Elf.

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

No subrace.

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Neri was born 5 Elven years prior the Champions delved into the Nexus to stop Iblees. Her parents were two human Cloud Temple monks who escaped from the Cloud Temple in time. They met the young girl, who was separated from her birth parents when they were boarding the Elven boat. Derivi was crying at the time, and they decided to take her with them. As she grew up, she began to learn how to farm and cook.

After both of her parents passed away at the ages of 65 and 63, she decided to set off into the world. She used the skills her parents taught her to make money, but a fateful event occured. A group of bandits surrounded her, then beat and mugged her. She was scared out of her mind. But then a soldier found her curled up alongside the road and helped he with the situation. The man told her that things like this happen all the time and how there are people worse off and gave her directions to a city. Neri pondered on what the man said, and decided to try and help people. She wanted to start a town to help the homeless and hungry of Asulon. Later on, she was ambushed by bandits again, and fended them off because of the man she met long ago's words.

What is your Character's ambitions?:

To start a town or a city, become less shy, and to help the needy people of Asulon.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:

Shy, but when threatened becomes vicious.

Open-Response-Questions

Answer at least three out of five listed

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

"Umm.... May I please have some bread, if it isn't any trouble...?"

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

"Um... Whose are these...? Uh.. I shouldn't take someones things... But I need them... Uh... *takes the items and walk off looking in all directions.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

She would try to go on the attack, but would end up getting frightened and hide.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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You have been Denied. This application presents the same mistakes or errors as last time.

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These were the main points which were bad or not so good of your application:

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Why did I deny you?

I find it hard to believe that you have been here for 7 months, looking at this app.

Short answers in the ORQ section are not adequate. We need to know what your character sees, thinks, smells, feels and hears in that situation, to an extent that we are there, and we know exactly how your character would react if it were allowed into the world of Asulon.

Your powergaming definition was somewhat incorrect, as was your metagaming. They were not long enough to form an adequate conclusion as to whether you 'knew your stuff' or you didn't.

Some Places That May Help You

Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthe...ry-suegary-stu/

Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthe...__1#entry303005

Some Tips: http://www.lordofthe...ur-application/

A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthe...plication-form/

A FAQ: http://www.lordofthe...oper-etiquette/

Server Rules: http://www.lordofthe....net/?page_id=8

Latest Format: http://www.lordofthe...ication-format/

Definitions (Seriously Useful): http://www.lordofthe...ng-definitions/

Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

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Once you fix these things you can re-apply but only 24 hours after your latest application. Use your time well and PM me if you have any questions.

[Lego XBOX 915]

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