The Tale Of Gorkil

[Sultan 3953]

Gorkil and Lurs birth only had a minute after each other, it is unknown who came first but like I said they are twins.

[craotor 617]

Yeah Rax is under big pressure.He wants to prove him self no matter what and doesnt care if he waists the lifes of his soldiers.If he can acomplish his goal he will do what ever it takes to prove that he can be just as good as his father.I wrote in my story that he sacrificed some of his men so he could lure th enemy and crush them.So yeah its complicated......

[Urahra 5781]

Gorkil and Lurs birth only had a minute after each other, it is unknown who came first but like I said they are twins.

If they were born one minute apart, they're definitely twins.

Only question now is if they're identical twins. Because I always imagined Gorkil looking like Mogroka and Lur looking like Craotor. Which is probably wrong, but it's just my imagination.

[Sultan 3953]

If they were born one minute apart, they're definitely twins.

Only question now is if they're identical twins. Because I always imagined Gorkil looking like Mogroka and Lur looking like Craotor. Which is probably wrong, but it's just my imagination.

There nonidentical twins, As gorkil is more darker green than Lur, and they look different, Also Lur would look like Bein'Lur not Craotor .

[Austin 697]

I always pictured Gorkil like Ned TBH.

[craotor 617]

Lur is a mixture of me and Bein but he would look more roughed up and wild because he spent most of his time either with his Black riding wolf or in the wilds hunting.He also would have a kind of dothraki((game of thrones)) hair stile but painted blood red of course.

[Urahra 5781]

Added another chunk of writing.

In this bit: Dom and Gorkil fight! Dom misses her mother! And her apprentices use drugs, apparently!

[Urahra 5781]

Added more.

In this bit: Krug actually talks! He talks a lot, actually! Holy crap, guys!

[Urahra 5781]

Added another bit.

Stuff's goin' down in the spirit world, ya'll!

[Austin 697]

Finnally took the time to sit down and read this, great read Urara

[Urahra 5781]

Added more. We're almost done. I wrote this bit on my phone during a three hour drive, so forgive any errors! Point them out if you see them so I can fix them.

Hmmm. I just dropped Dom and Gorkil into a fiery industrial hell full of nightmare monsters. Why does this feel like a Silent Hill game? XD

[Urahra 5781]

Okay, finally got to the end. I wrote a 13,000 word lore story for you, LOTC. I wrote 90% of it on my iPhone. I even included a TLDR at the end for those of you too lazy to read it all.

Love triumphs over grief. Happy end.

[Aislin 4354]

Well now I have to read it. Will do when I get home.

[Urahra 5781]

Do tell me what you think. I know it's long, but I worked hard on it.

Apparently, though, SOME people don't appreciate hard work! Which is why I included the TLDR for THOSE people who think my stories are nothing but walls of text!

You know who you are. *glare*

[Lexperiments 18]

*clap clap clap* GREAT STORY. YESSSSSS.