The Tale Of Gorkil

[Urahra 5779]

((Removed.))

[Jarkarll 314]

(( Wow! Urara you put a lot of work into this! Great read!))

[Sultan 3953]

(I loved it only problom is orcs are not buried or put in a tomb, they are burnt, on a bone fire, and depending on the stature and rank of a orc, the bonefire would be bigger and bigger taller and taller, in the tombs they would place something that is most dear to the orc, for example axe or a shield what he held most dear to him, for example when Bog was killed we placed food in his tomb lol..)

[Urahra 5779]

((Oooooh. Okay. I saw the tombs in the Gorkil fort and I thought orcs buried their dead. I'll fix it. Thanks for telling me, Mogroka.

EDIT: And while I was fixing it, I added more! Whoo, productive!))

[craotor 617]

Fell like finishing the Lur story now.Wished i had a pc here.....

[Urahra 5779]

Frick. I wanted a monopoly on Krug's kids' stories. Oh well. Two of four ain't bad.

[Urahra 5779]

Added a chunk of writing.

In this installment: Dom faints! Gorkil is concerned! Rax is kind of an *******! What will happen next? Stay tuned.

[Lexperiments 18]

Added a chunk of writing.

In this installment: Dom faints! Gorkil is concerned! Rax is a huge *******! What will happen next? Stay tuned.

Fixed for you :3

[Urahra 5779]

That's my characterization for Krug's kids. Gorkil is the noble, leaderly, kind hearted, mature one, though he can be a bit soft at times. Dom is cheerful and energetic, but she's also a little naive and prone to depression. Lur is the quiet, stoic, cold one. And Rax is the ENORMOUS ******* bully.

But I sort of think Rax is the kind of guy who bottles up his feelings and hides them under a guise of assholeness. Because feelings are weak. There's a lot of pressure on him, being a clan leader and a son of Krug. You know he wept like a baby when mommy died. He just did it in private. He was a total momma's boy. He went to Grahla for advice on everything. He still has the wolf doll Grahla made for him when he was a cub, though he keeps it hidden.

I like complicated characters.

[Sultan 3953]

Also dont forget Rax is the First son of Krug, then come Lur and Gorkil the nonidentical twins, then comes dawn.

[Urahra 5779]

My mental birth order is Rax, Gorkil, Lur, and Dom. Is that correct?

[Destroyer_Bravo 1054]

(( This almost maks me want to reroll an orc after this character I have bites the dust. But then there's the matter of learning blah... ))

[bungo 3965]

[[it's not hard to learn the blah, easiest to do is to spell everything out at first, you learn over time.]]

[craotor 617]

Yeah Rax is ment to be a huge ******* and who thinks hes the best for being the first born of Krug

[Urahra 5779]

There's more to him than that, though. People who act like assholes almost never do it just because they're assholes. Like I said, Rax is probably under a huge amount of pressure. He's got to live up to his father's legacy and that's pretty hard to do when your dad's basically a god. Acting like a jerk is his way of compensating. If he shows the slightest bit of vulnerability, he's seen as less strong and not worthy of his father's legacy.

Which makes him interesting. I'd like to write more about him. My stories are mostly just "snapshots" into their lives and not big lore stories, so I think I could write a story about Rax without destroying the lore.