[Denied]2Nd Attempt At Application! :d Creeperface84

[CreeperGeneration 0]

 

Out-Of-Character Details

I'm very helpful and nice. Always happy to help.
Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Central Time, U.S.A
Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes.
Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: I had some expeirence in Roleplay on a game called World of Warcraft. I also do some Larping, or Live action roleplaying. I enjoy to Roleplay and I constantly do it on minecraft and in Real Life everyday.
Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Absoloutely.
How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I came upon it while searching for a new server to Join.
Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:
http://www.minecraft.../page__st__2060Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraft...nique-gameplay/! : Yes.

Definitions

In
your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is
the act of making a character a playing it as if it was your own life.
Roleplaying makes you act out and mimic a characters actions.
In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: The use of out of game information to affect one's gaming. Or to say it Refers to Gaps in a game.
In
your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power-emoting
is action your character does to another without letting the other
player have a say in it.

In-Character Details

Silent
and concealing. Not very polite and only speaks to people of his own
race. Very strong with the hammer and loves to hear people scream.
Character Name: Torkin
Character Race: Dwarf
Character
biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain
your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other
details you deem necessary: Torkin is 76 and very rude. He has red hair a
long red beard and black pupils.  His parents had left him in a war
shop when he was a kid. The only thing they left him was a War Hammer.
He
grew up to be very disliked amoung others. No one wanted anything to do
with him. The time he hit 30 he joined the Dwarf infanty. He used his
hammer to slay foes. At 69 he had a major injury in a encounter with
some goblins. He quit the infantry at 70. He had a scar across his Left
eye and a scar straight down his chest.
  Torkin never talked to
anyone for about 5 years after that. He wondered around for years with
his black cloack. Finally he friended a hobbit named Reun. He and Reun
traveled all over Asulon. Reun died 3 years later when Torkin was 75.
Reun died from a battle with some orcs. Torkin has been very concealing
and secretive since.


What are your characters ambitions?: To slay all of the existing Orcs and Goblins.
Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:
http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/dwarf-from-the-lord-of-rings/ , My computer does not allow pictures sorry!Is
there anything else you would like to say about your character: Do not
be offended by Torkin if he insults you. He is just very grumpy.

Open-Response-Questions

Each
question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph,
and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in
roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be
detailed, not short.

Upon entering
the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling
out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he
is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your
response?
I walk up to the rugged dwarf and ask a simple question, "Why are you pour?" The dwarf replies hesitantly, "My father told

me to do something but I was foolish and did not listen." I stare at him darkly and leave him. He does not deserve my pity.

My cloak swirls around in his stubbish face and I leave without a trace.
You’re
wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to
threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation
looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character
do?
I unsheathe my big War Hammer. I smack the Orc upside the
head with it. The orc fights back 1 blow my stomach. "Ha! You puny dwarf, you think you can defeat me the all powerful-" He is interrupted with a  hit in
the face with my War Hammer again. He growls and smacks me to the
ground. I wince and stand up and tackle him. I then repeadetly
slam him with my hammer. I spit on his body and say, "Pathetic Orcs, never should've been put on this planet."
Whilst
walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His
walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask
something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he
falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you
watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless
man. What does your character do?:
I suspicously look at the Old man.
No one should be trusted, No one! I grab the bag of coins and Harshly yell, "Where did you get these?!". He answers roughly, "It is my money, my retirement money, please understand!" I hand them over hesitantly then slowly think I shouldn't have been so harsh, but I push the thought away and continue walking.walk down the cobblestone road just as I was before.

 

 

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

Your application has been...

 

 

Please include some official server lore in your biography. You can find some on the forums and/or wiki.

 

Please expand on all three Open Response Questions.

 

Powergaming in the second Open Response Question. You can't defeat an Orc easily.

 

Please include your Minecraft name. I could not find it in your application.

 

Skin is over used.

 

 

Please re-apply in 24 hours.

 

If you have any questions, please, don't hesitate to PM me.

[MonkeyCoffee 516]

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