VictoriaMinaj

Ysabeau reads through this declaration, merely and strictly fixating on the name of some familiar friend. "God be good to him."

Amendments/Additions implemented into main lore post. Thank you for your submission. Moving to correct subforum to prevent redundancy and clutter.

Amendments/Additions implemented into main lore post. Thank you for your submission. Moving to correct subforum to prevent redundancy and clutter.

Amendments/Additions implemented into main lore post. Thank you for your submission. Moving to correct subforum to prevent redundancy and clutter.

This lore has been denied. You will be sent a forum PM regarding the reasons for denial within the next 24 hours.

This lore has been denied. You will be sent a forum PM regarding the reasons for denial within the next 24 hours.

This lore has been denied. You will be sent a forum PM regarding the reasons for denial within the next 24 hours.

Amendments/Additions implemented into main lore post. Thank you for your submission. Moving to correct subforum to prevent redundancy and clutter.

Application completed. Denied. Given recent projects and eventlines, the team doesn't feel as though it would be a wise choice to admit any new lair; especially when there are only up to three members that will make use of the said. We advise that you attempt to establish this sort of roleplay through existing nations and/or settlements, as most won't particularly care about your affairs as a vassalized state. My discord is Vi#3544 for any concern that you may have.

i'm just confused as to how this would even be possible when current azdrazi lore disables the player from practicing any slotted magic, including BM. as well, after skimming through the submission, the spells are batshit op and it doesn't really seem like these ideas are congruent with the whole theme that blood magic has going on in regards of non-combative, utility and narrative-oriented rituals/abilities. in-fact, this is what i think about each proposed ability/rite: the blood fire tear - embark ritual with minimal (fluff and aesthetic) variations the gobblet of blood & fire - potentially the only narrative-oriented rite in this submission, but it's also overcomplicated regarding requirements (like 12 nephilim is a bit overkill ngl) the blood-fire forge - vehement smithing and (overpowered) ensorcell material all-in-one. seems a bit redundant and out-of-place when compared to other blood magic marriage pieces, or blood magic lore itself flame torrent - batshit op. reminds me of old lore where authors would try to make their spell very taxing or take many emotes to cast in order to strengthen the effects ethereal form - this literally makes no sense within this context arraxes' wrath - why does flame torrent take 8 emotes, but u can summon a literal dragon in 6? ngl this should be wholly scrapped blood fire arrows - quite redundant when you can just set them on with normal fire or dragonsflame

i think blood magic is fine as it is. not every lore needs to have some sort of leeway to impact combat (per the 'blood crystallization' mechanic that you've written for this submission, given that you can make weapons through it) + the amendment you're proposing is only a one-line clarification, that you could've just mentioned to the ST for fixing...

Ysabeau stumbled upon this notice. Her eyes read from start to finish; Smack! The woman's palm shot upward, and slammed against the chest. She then turned over the missive, scribbling upon it few rhythmic verbose and ultimately depositing the paper within the pocket in her gown: "Crawl, carve- the string of fate recoils, and shines. Lodge in a stitch; part of its gleam. It flows, and crawls. A pattern as thin, sweet, and small, as motes made of glistened dust. Crushed, and severed. The string dies down; forgotten behind wilted roses."

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This lore has been denied. You will be sent a forum PM regarding the reasons for denial within the next 24 hours. SELF DENIED