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How's a twisted spirit relate to Dragonkin-esque boons? I felt like I was reading a season of Teen Wolf.

depth to something that's already underlining, well thought +1

As a wraith, it can't be expressed how much I want to see this lore be passed. First off, it's well done, making us less cluttered with being able to distinguish ourselves beside be under the constant guise of creatures from ages ago. Instead, this here doesn't change our already base abilities, while branching to not make us not literal rip-offs of harbingers, and wraiths. Swgr's lore is reasonable, good, and he's taken the time out of his day to write this to simply help us out. Mordring is played by the lore-maker himself as all current wraiths respect him, least I do.

I like it, but how long would it take to casts the spells? Sorry if you listed it and I didn't see.

When magic is created, it must contain the property of balance. So, looking at this magic here you can summon armor/weapons, heal at extreme levels, and suffer no mental or physical drawbacks. You could possibly two emote this magic, while you’re also able to contact the dead that screams meta, and summon dudes with black maces able to take on Setherien’s minions. I think at one point I was reading something about compelling people into speaking the truth, why? What Saint wants to force people into things, because at that point what makes them different from anyone else? Everything aside, I’ve always thought it was the most interesting because at end of the day religion is all about faith. You don’t need something in return, you simply have your faith because you believe that ideology to be right, even if the Saints aren’t giving you power. Oh, not to forget about the holy fire you're able to summon. If I'm not mistaken even an average paladin can't do that, only a Keeper. They instead can only use Xan's mist to forge weapons, but still, ridiculously overpowered.

I think it's interesting because you're a good writer, but I don't think it's an interesting magic. We already have enough deity magics, which all can do the same thing as this magic here. Not every God-like being needs to lend out their powers either, and just another point, why make another magic when people complain about getting into circle-jerks now? I'd rather see what we have being filled rather then more being made.

That's what I call short and sweet. It's something different, instead of a super sayian killer it's more RP driven.

Honestly, it's cool this empowers deity users. You commonly worship your patron, gain their gifts, then fall stagnant somewhat. A cleric for example earning this is neat-o. Good writing as always, thanks for the lore.

Hakuna Matata?

then artemic wrekted me like saitama from one punch-man, if you've never seen that, recommend giving it a try This might not be 100% lore, but.. least the message has been spread.

“LOVE NOT WAR.” - Said by a follower of the peace sign, The peace sign represents radiating vibes of kindness and goodness. Like the name itself, it’s the sign of peace. Peace is a broad term, but typically involves practicing acceptance, co-existing with nature, and other hippie-like things. If your lord is being a tyrant, shishkabob, just give him the peace sign. It can be utilized for every and anything, battle, communication, jokes, peace signs have many pathways. By battle, if your homie is slicing and dicing you, but you’re not in the mood to fight, give him the peace sign. The fateful fable of the peace sign A druid who was metically Ascended hustled about the day normally. He’d finally see a pleasant place beneath a tree, a grimace appearing as he made his way to it; visage bobbing from side to side, having lack of balance in his stride. He’d contently plop down and recline back within the grass’ natural comfort. With one open eye he sighs to winds, seeing two free-falling leaves descend onto Vailor. He couldn't help but ask himself.. was this leaf courting? The thought dispersed and subsided as he saw those two leaves before, formed and forged the very first peace sign. It’s rumored the peace signs existence was will of the Aspects themselves. Why, because it’d forge a symbol advocating peace and nature, which in turn helps their movement progress. That’s a mere theory of the hippie sign, as just said above, the druid found the hippie sign. Druids did it first. What can the peace sign be used for? The peace sign can be used for a wide variety of things. You wanna write a peace sign on your local necromancer’s hideout? You can do so, perhaps hoping he changes like the common relationship. Maybe aid in spreading the symbol based on clarity, inner-peace, and good radiating vibes? It’s a gesture which like a meme, can seep into many cultures and be used for actual things. Like, if your head is about to be chopped off and you don’t have time to say anything, flash the peace sign. Remember flash the peace sign!

Myself personally, I tried pondering something new magical-wise and came up empty. It seemed like LOTC had the perfect amount, along with it all having flavor. This magic is new, balanced, and defiantly quality work. Props to you. +1

With the addition of harbingers, ghouls, and wraiths themselves regenerating in weeks or less. If we stamped liches with perma-deaths, they'd have little attraction, if any. I mean, 3 months itself is a long ass time compared to everyone else. Not to mention people who get attached to their lich-- for them it´ll seem like forever. Not everyone is fair... then having to wait 3 months over faulty information or being meta-stalled? It seems pretty fair to me. Your point that liches are bounded to a necromancer because they have their phylacteries, well yes. The thing though, liches aren´t compelled to follow their commands. They can plot and deceive until they find a way to gain a advantage over said necromancer. It allows a chance for hope, instead of having no way around it. It also adds more RP between the necromancer or necromancers, who make them. Instead of slavery, it turns into a pact, and at the very least allows a lich room to be somewhat themselves. The necromancer has to trust the lich and vice versa. I think before they were 1-dimensional, being completely enslaved with little emotions produces non-fun RP. This new lore spices everything up for multiple parties. Why not have wraiths and both liches? For me at least, when the word necromancer pops in my head, I imagine a eroding, powerful skeleton. People now have two paths instead of achieving one end goal not everyone likes. This is my opinion, but I'd wholeheartedly agree with you about the soul gem. Just my thoughts on Jistuma's points.