[Denied][Pending] White-List Application: Mistel

[Mistel 242]

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?:Mistel

How old are you?:13

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications): no

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: 

• Breaking server lore

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? From another server

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?: Playing as a character person or role you are not

What is metagaming?: using information you character has never learned but you learned in a ooc way

What is powergaming?: Not letting the other person you are fighting against hit you basically being a god impossible to  kill/ injure

 

In-Character Information

 

Character’s name: Talos Edward Harkness

Character’s gender: Male

Character’s race: Wood elf

Character’s age: 18

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): Talos lived most of his life alone. His father was killed by thieves that attacked they're camp when they were moving to Cerulin. when he was only a month old. His mother could not support him . So she left him on a doorstep. he was raised to 12.  he then ran away into the Woodlands.

        He taught himself how to hunt. He had to hunt for survival. he was hunting one day for rabbit in the winter season.  the snow was falling so hard he got lost. he was looking for his camp. He then was attacked by the Caravan. he was knocked out and lost every thing. After a few hours He was saved by healing monk in the cloud temple.

       

Personality Traits: quite strong,stands up for what he believes in, protective of things he likes.

Ambitions: Wants to become a master archer, wants to meet Phaedrus Lle'hileia

Strengths/Talents: Archery can string a bow. Scaling trees quickly. can quickly move

Weaknesses/Inabilities:  Hard for him to adapt, he doesn't know when to quit, he cant see far distances with his left eye

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): height: 5.7 Weight: 76 pounds (he looks like my skin)

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guidehere): http://www.needcoolshoes.com/skin/u2zzS/me

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I am putting your application on pending as I believe that there are changes that need to be fixed before I can accept you into the server. Please modify the application with the changes below within the next 24 hours. When you do edit the application, please send me a private message so that I can look through it and give you a faster answer.

 

• Your definitions can be worked on, I can see where you are coming from but more detail would be better.
• The biography needs to be longer, have reference to server lore (click here for the wiki) and less cliche's would be a nice touch.
• Expand upon your personality traits and ambitions.
• Adjust your strengths and weaknesses, it's unbalanced.

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To reiterate, please have these modifications to your application within 24 hours and once you do, please privately message me so that I can review it as quickly as you edit it.

 

If you are unsure how to privately message, all you have to do is click on my picture and on the right it should say "Send me a message".

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Your application is denied because you failed to modify the application as indicated.

 

You may reapply to the server 24 hours from now.

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