[Denied] My Retry On My Application

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Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: assassincookie

How old are you?:11

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications):https://www.lordofthecraft.net/topic/131852-my-application-to-lord-of-the-craft/?view=getnewpost

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:i aggree on the rules for the villans

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! (You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): no i now understand the rules

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? ive found out on youtube

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is a proformance of a role

What is metagaming?:strategy, action, or method used in a game which transcends a

prescribed ruleset

What is powergaming?: a style of interacting with the game or game like thing with the aim of the progress towards the goal.

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

Character’s name:Wolfmare

Character’s gender:Male

Character’s race:Human

Character’s age:20

Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.):

My name is Wolfmare. I was born in Ashloy before it was flooded. I never new my human parents, so i was raised by my dark elf father named Tiddis.

We lived in a cabin little bit far away from the other villages, and from young age Tiddis train me in the art of steath.I live a nice life intill

at age 16 Tiddis just left without a trace, so I made a promise to myself in order to find my father

and at the time some hooded people just destoryed a monk temple that hold a anceint sparer that would have cured the curse of oblise, so

it was very hard to get informaion because of the chaos. I ended up getting on the great ships along with the other races, and along that time I was

that I have left my home. Oh that day was a very sad day for me a very...very sad day. The ships landed at Ellyslum after two years of voyage

and later Kalos where they resuppiled their ships all was happy that time. The ships sailed again for atlest 6 months intill we stubbled apon a continet called Aythos.

Once the races settle on the land harsh battles broke out that soon became wars. i had to sneak my way out onece or twice that time. As the land was being spilted in blood.

There has been whispers that a god like weapon called the Golden Lance was made to destory these deamon like people from long ago. While the races where at war with each other

Adventurers gather relics in order to find the Golden Lance,but they found a safe heaven where the lance was. The land was called The Fridge.

With the Lance and the new land the races set a glorious battle with the lance striking the Dragon deamon,man all that ash was enough to cover the sky itself. That victory only last a time

When Aythos begain to flood, then buired with a watery grave along with the fridge. With no where to turn back to a portal had open up that lead to a land called thaous. Its climate was harsh

with cold winds which made a bad place for crops. Ive seen so much death in my eyes but this was worst. Familys dying, starving childern, it was all to much. Yet there was hope and hope to try

find my father. The ships sailed for a new world and i hope to join the army to find my father.

Personality Traits: somewhat depress, hopeful, brave

Ambitions: to find my dark elf father

Strengths/Talents: archery,sneaking,

Weaknesses/Inabilities: watch as friends and families fall

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): 139 pounds 69.7 inches tall

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):http://i61.tinypic.com/2n07og2.jpg

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• Both your powergaming and metagaming defintions were plagiarized off of Wikipedia. Plagiarism is a serious offense and is not taken lightly. Take this as your first and last warning. Being caught in the act of plagiarism again will result in an application ban.
• If your character is twenty years old, he would not have been around for the acts of Kalos, Anthos or even The Fringe.

You may reapply in twenty-four hours.

 

Message me with any and all questions.

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