Laeonathan 3930 Share Posted June 10, 2022 2 hours ago, MeteorDragon said: yes +1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
RandomRhunes 146 Share Posted June 10, 2022 I love it Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qizu 4037 Author Share Posted June 10, 2022 2 hours ago, Pancho said: Love this, easy +1 Quick question though, how do these Fr es tires react to ahzl since they are undead? They are immune to poison and natural disease. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valannor 6345 Share Posted June 10, 2022 While the premise is definitely very intriguing, as I myself am a fan of the niche Thallassos fills, I don't think this piece is at all "it", as it were. I get a very uncanny feeling reading it, can definitely tell it was rushed out in a hurry with no real consideration of implementation, or how that might fare. More than a few mechanics come up short, and some are just not there entirely - definitely not something I think works to this piece's benefit at all. I'll leave much of my criticism to loremag, but this ain't it, chief. 7 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qizu 4037 Author Share Posted June 10, 2022 15 minutes ago, Valannor said: While the premise is definitely very intriguing, as I myself am a fan of the niche Thallassos fills, I don't think this piece is at all "it", as it were. I get a very uncanny feeling reading it, can definitely tell it was rushed out in a hurry with no real consideration of implementation, or how that might fare. More than a few mechanics come up short, and some are just not there entirely - definitely not something I think works to this piece's benefit at all. I'll leave much of my criticism to loremag, but this ain't it, chief. It wasn't necessarily prepared to be accepted on the first go around as I haven't really touched this kind of lore so I wrote down my foundational pieces in hopes that the review for it could help provide me some insight! And yes I did this last night so I'm sure there are a few patches that need placed. 2 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astrophysical 999 Share Posted June 10, 2022 Sahagin rp... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glade 521 Share Posted June 10, 2022 1 hour ago, Qizu said: It wasn't necessarily prepared to be accepted on the first go around as I haven't really touched this kind of lore so I wrote down my foundational pieces in hopes that the review for it could help provide me some insight! And yes I did this last night so I'm sure there are a few patches that need placed. I am excited to see where the piece goes. Good luck! 2 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
wowj 2747 Share Posted June 10, 2022 I think this would be cool as an event creature too 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
OldeTymer 322 Share Posted June 11, 2022 Qizu, I have become a big fan of your contributions as of late. Very neat! I can clearly see attributes of previous submissions, but you have done a good job at balancing this CA with your rendition. I anticipate the epic pirate RP potential. 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ropceek 69 Share Posted June 11, 2022 Hmmmm, I think its bit op, but anyway +1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gemini 1639 Share Posted June 12, 2022 Chunks of tuna in brine Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qizu 4037 Author Share Posted June 12, 2022 6 hours ago, player 67Ui829 said: lacks narrative drivers, balance and thematic consistency Feel free to go more in-depth! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zacho 1736 Share Posted June 12, 2022 i didnt read a lot of it, but dont make it take 5 ooc months to get this magic 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Qizu 4037 Author Share Posted June 12, 2022 4 hours ago, Zacho said: i didnt read a lot of it, but dont make it take 5 ooc months to get this magic I don’t know where you saw that at Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMuted 2459 Share Posted June 12, 2022 coolio Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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