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How To Avoid Making A Mary Sue / Gary Stu


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Thank ya, sir! I appreciate it.

If anyone else spots anything I missed, I'd appreciate if you'd tell me.

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-Claiming unearned status or power. Ooooh, so your character is the Knight Commander of the Oren Guard? Uh, no. If you want to be powerful, you apply as a footsoldier and work for a promotion. Just like in real life.

of the OREN guard

OREN guard

I don't think Oren exists anymore...

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Holy Empire of Oren.

That's why I left that one in.

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Would a concubine-like character as a Mori be considered Gary Stu or something?

No, they have quite a few weakness.

Anyway, this is the first EVERY out of MANY guides that I really LIKED. I would love to see more of these guides of yours!

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Why, thank you!

I was thinking of writing a few more guides, perhaps including "How to RP Romance (the NOT stupid way!)" and "How to write a half-decent Magic App".

We'll see how bored I get, eh?

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Avoid orcs killing your parents...

Oh wait thats just clique...

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I got 16. Pretty happy, most definitely NOT a Stu. Was a little worried that having a good looking, fast and skilful thief would be Stu-like when I was looking at the test. Well, my first char on the server was not s Stu. I feel like a good newbie!

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I always run characters through a Sue test. I got a 5-2 for a total of 3 in the Universal one for my newest one, but the main reason is so I can look and see if I can smooth it out more. Unrelated, if you could have a Mary Sue in real life, that'd be my cat.

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