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Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Minecraft Account Name: ReconTRON

How old are you?: 12

Time-Zone: GMT+0800

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Roman Ancient Roleplaying.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: A Friend.

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: None.

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes.

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing: To play a role of someone you are not, or to be someone else, to play as another role.

Meta-gaming: Out of character actions, cheating by using knowledge previously owned, or obtained??

Power-emoting: Forcing and using words to express actions not giving your partner/opponent a chance. Overpowering them.

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name: Joseph S. Walters

Current Age: 21

Sub-race (if any): Northerner

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): I, now in my twenties, still can remember that day. The day, my father confessed that my mother died. At that time, I was only 7, I didn't really understand what death was. I hugged my father, and asked "What was mother like?". My father's eyes brimmed with tears, he looked up, eyes distant. "She was nice, kind and humerous. You have her eyes, her smile was bright like the sun, it warmed my heart.".

 

A few years later, when My father was stationed near the crownlands, he took me into the city. The moment I walked into the city, I had never seen such a beautiful sight, but I was 15 back then. I had much, to see. My father looked deeply in my eyes, he laid a heavy arm on my shoulders. "Son, you've grown up so fast, its time for you to set your future."

My father nodded to the blacksmith. "He will take good care of you." My father placed my hand in the rough blacksmith's. My father heaved the sack of all I owned, he placed it in my hands, he kissed my forehead. As the blacksmith took me to his smithery, I looked around, but one thing caught my eye. The sound of metal clattering against each other, sparks would fly out each time, and molten metal being cooled off by ice water. I was too fascinated to remember my father. But I was sure, I felt his heavy loving eyes on my back.

Ambitions for the Future: To serve in the military and join The Order Of The White Rose.

Personality: Doesn't trust easily, protective of family and friends, loyal. Like to ponder at the tip of mountains.

Skills: Crafting Weapons, Using A Sword

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Attached Thumbnail

Any other details you wish to share about your character: Always alert. Watches the military train in his spare time.

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

 

Answer: Joseph continues to follow the dark-clothed figure down the road, to make sure its actually a hostile, Joseph yells for the guards, the dark clothed figure looks back, Joseph sprints and tackles the dark clothed man to the ground, awaiting the guards to arrive. Once the guards have arrived, Joseph leaves the job to them and makes his way to the human capital.

 

 

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?

 

Answer: Joseph has dealt with Bandits before, and are very common in the land, Joseph calmly approaches, they do not notice him. The old man see's him, Joseph directs him to one of the bandits. The old man understands. Joseph reaches for his long sword and hits one of the bandits in the head with his blade hilt, knocking him out, while the old man trips the other. Joseph finishes off the tripped bandit by stabbing him in the chest. Then doing the same to the knocked out bandit. The old man thanks Joseph and Joseph leaves.

 

 

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

 

Answer: Joseph asks for the price of his leather bags, the small man asks Joseph to set a price, Joseph then asks for the lowest price before, and decreases it by 10. The small man says fine, and Joseph buys the leather bag.

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Hello! After reading through your application, I've decided to deny it for the following reasons:

 

  • You have not included any lore in your application, please do so. Here is a link to the wiki to help you get some! http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/
  • Please expand some more on your character's childhood, add some things that may have happened in his life.
  • Please add some dialogue to all of your Open Response Questions, we want to see your roleplaying capabilities.
  • You need a VA to kill someone in your second Open Response Question.
  • Lastly, I need confirmation that your parents allow you to play on this server, since people that are below 13 need confirmation of their parents, and you're 12. PM me with that, and then put up your new app, and you're ready to go!

 

Please re-apply in 24 hours from this post or face instant denial. If you have any questions, feel free to pop me a PM!

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